Lust harem

Frankly, I’d like to like this game, I really would… but I’ve played it often enough to understand that what you call Humor; I don’t. Nor will I ever. I also don’t think you have any idea what the hell you really want to do with this story. There is about half the damned character list that straight up didn’t need to be introduced. Instead of attractive demons; you gave us a midget, and a maneater (literally) And do you REALLY think it’s FUNNY to give the MC diseases because he CAN fuck the first “boss” character = who’s only what she is because the goddamned Witcher 3 had a quest. [You’re NOT supposed to want to fuck that ghost you bloody idiot – and that ONE point alone proves you never meant to take any of this seriously enough that anyone should ever have supported you. At all]

= You could do Vampire. You could do Lamia if you want to go less common name for the same thing or a succubus (You could even differentiate that the Lamia is like Major Character Succubus’ Big Sister and CAN do combat) you could do werewolf to at least have a viable reason for “petplay” and Doggie Style… It’s not that hard to come up with puns that fit the genre, and are actually funny if you want to rib the audience a little. A. Little… Klaus IS NOT a little. He’s proof that you don’t know how to develop an actual character, or how far to carry a “joke.” At this point he’s Darth Jar Jar levels of plausible, because only the actual Antagonist would be that level of retard in playing the ‘long game’ that hard.

There’s the fact he’s the assumptive at least secondary heir in a prominent family (that for… REASONS, he decides not to have anything to do with = That SHOULD mean he doesn’t have to worry about money Genius!!!) Who’s forced to work at a burger joint to earn finances. [This could also be resolved in the half cocked dungeon section… we’ll get to that]

You straight up KILLED one harem character off; and then talk about pregnancy in her content (she’s undead you dipshit – you know what needs to be functional and ALIVE in order for pregnancy to happen? Her fucking Ovaries!) You also overpowered the “Big Sister” for no reason – undercutting the MC is NOT HAREM. Especially when every other girl he’s supposed to WANT to chase (IE The Player needs to WANT to chase…) is also insulting the fuck out of him, unavailable – literally in some cases – or an asshole)

= Fox girl doesn’t get to upstage the MC for import, OR cock tease that much… – unless you legitmately want to make HER his doorway to actual Apotheosis. (She could be a secret goddess, and testing him as her Chosen Champion – then with better development she can admit she always intended to make him at least a Demigod. Or her Consort as a new god – to begin with; and then have her explain that it’s more like a supercharged secondary class system. MC and anyone he chooses becomes “immortal,” in as far as the natural/magical world. So need to worry about aging, and ages can be reversed if too old to breed – but how you develop your individual godhood would be another branch of the RPG. You could even state that getting him with all the monster girls and getting him to accept a harem lifestyle was about tapping his hidden potential and opening his mind. As the stinger that he was the one all along with INSANE potential = with the Lust Magic being the key to unlocking that. But I’m skipping ahead a bit.

The structure of your system so far is too much like Gothic. No one who’s actually played Gothic OR Risen liked Gothic or Risen. Why? Because you can HAVE the points needed to level up. Meet all the fucking requirements they want: you STILL have to have the gold to BUY the damned skills AND find the fucking trainer for it. That’s NOT an RPG. That’s Let Me Blue Ball You: The Game. (Which you’re already doing with WAY too many females… but that’s another issue) The magic COULD have been level restricted for each school. Or even just certain powerful schools. But that would require that you actually LET the Dungeon function well enough to allow players to bloody level up. Before they turn 60 in real years. The dungeon also doesn’t really give you anything overall that you can use for MONEY. Besides selling rat tails (which you also need to advance the plot…)

= You don’t have that many options for actual equipment. Most of it straight up WON’T be that helpful, and you don’t know what actually WILL. The schools of magic all require you to pay for each spell; on top of having the skill points, on top of getting the levels to GET the skill points = What the fuck is he even attending SCHOOL for?!? The premise? YOU decided what powers he started with. You decided what school he got to start… You decide his fucking back story; and according to it he’s barely functional as a bloody character. Never mind the DRIVING FORCE. Why am I not PLAYING the sister if she’s that much better off. Jesus dude. This is NOT how you call something an RPG. There are no passive traits, there’s barely anything gained WHEN YOU DO level up. There’s NO ASPECT here that would be salvagable. Which was why you had to go and add demons (you could have made it so there were no places that had 6-7 enemies appear at a time and hand the Party their asses… or made it so that more than just ONE fucking girl actually wants to go down there and help your retarded ass level up – and I mean that literally. He is legitimatelly retarded. If you don’t know what I mean, look the word up. You’ll see I’m not wrong) Hell you have CAPSTONE spells that not only are literally pointless because good luck either finding or affording them… but you can ONLY USE ONE. There’s a whole fuck ton of builds you could’ve implemented if we got to choose HALF of what we should and you actually implemented weapons and armor in the shops. But no.

Moving on because I could write a dissertation on that whole subject alone…

= You have one girl that randomly inserts herself into the harem; and then BUGGERS off the moment you hit a certain event in the story that SHE doesn’t want you to go to (that also is at least semi required, and is an avenue to gain another potential GIRL… Do I need to explain to you, really Dev, why in this specific GENRE = that DOES. NOT. GET. TO. HAPPEN!) If you were going to pull that with ANY character at all, for any reason – why did you bother rendering her in the game? We already have most of the cast on the list getting fuck and all screen time. Some of them don’t really need to be there. Like the principal’s daughter (step?) we get one scene with her that comes off entirely forced; she treats us like an ass the whole rest of the game and it’s NOT EVEN a SEX SCENE! It’s fucking FOREPLAY. Which implies there should be A PATH TO MORE… I guess you’ll get on it some day. And I’ll find a pot of gold under a rainbow. I swear.

What’s the point of Pig Girl? The only reason she even considers fucking MC is because she got transmoged into a pig. That’s not attractive. She ain’t sleeping beauty, and you should NOT be treating your MC like he IS the type to stick his cock into LITERALLY any willing hole. Fuck. Me…

There’s the two students who barely happen to be in the game, who you as an official of the law in ANY capacity should NOT need or want to “corrupt.” There’s Kate – who admonishes you and does whatever the fuck she wants (she WILL NOT break off with the boyfriend – EVEN THOUGH THAT’S THE POINT OF A HAREM YOU MORON!!!) JUST because YOU AS THE DEV were too stupid to input the choice to tell MC’s “best” girl that she’s NOT going to be his ONLY girl. Gah!!! * Either remove Kate from the fucking game as absolutely unnecessary and actual NTR content, or go fuck yourself and FIX this. So that A) “Best” girl PROVES it and LETS MC STRAIGHT UP HAVE THE HAREM; or KATE will accept that the baby belongs to MC so she HAS to choose HIM. This DID NOT need to be an issue to drag on, it’s NOT about HER body/Her CHoice = SHE made the choice when she let the dipshit fuck her without a condom! Now the consequence is the boyfriend she CHOOSES was the one that KNOCKED HER THE FUCK UP, and WILL do so more than once. End of. Same thing with the rich married twit that doesn’t need to be in the game but is because you wanted a dumbassed yacht scene. Wherein at ANY fucking point you choose to go with YOUR GIRLFRIEND you also could have written it that they bloody well talk about him wanting a harem and how she might goddamned feel about it! Even just to feel her out and or wear her down on it so that Kate’s BULLSHIT stance never becomes an issue to start with.

At this point MC has more girls waiting in the wings because you’d rather the player GRINDS until his fingers fall, off or his keyboard’s dead. Pare it DOWN. Or start making it easier to GET some of the women in the fucking harem. So that THEY can start helping him out by negating some of the bullshit in finances. None of what I am suggesting here would be a hard concept. If you had taken ANY of this game remotely serious in the first place. Now however, the only way I can see that you will salvage it’s potential (and it DID have SOME potential at the beginning) would be to bloody well re-tool the whole damned thing from the ground up. Which you’re not going to do. You’ve effectively created the most underpowered Harem Leader in the universe, with the most overcomplicated, half baked and uselessly implemented mechanics that MIGHT have been an actual RPG if done properly, that I have ever seen.

= There are TWO things that draw MOST people to this sort of game. That are not the potential for RPG mechanics that MIGHT be decently implemented. One: The girls. Two: Pregnancy. You have more girls on the list than the MC can actually GET with properly, and most of them cannot as yet get pregnant. Some of the ones that can, even in looking at this current update’s changelog, REALLY shouldn’t. For that alone, I wouldn’t be able to recommend this game to anyone who doesn’t absolutely adore pointless overcomplication in most mechanical systems, and grinding. Way too much grinding. Buddy, it’s okay to want to make the girls shine… but a Harem is a MALE lead POWER fantasy. The one who shines brightest; or should be adored by all the women to the point of NEAR worship, is the MC. At this point, you’ve got him doing all their bitch work, just to get a crumb of pussy… and that’s IF he can even FIND it to start with.

Eileen and Helen quests blank. Can’t see how to progress Helen after a bit. Never got to win her over to you know… ‘waifu’ status.

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Also, my G–. The Klaus storyline stuff is fucking hilarious. Pure gold. You could get rich writing comedy. Klaus’ lines really cannot put it into words how funny he is.