WVM

Braindrop,

Man I’ve supported you from the beginning… but this latest update was REALLY disappointing.

= First; you DO recall that you actually put Jasmine IN CHARGE of MANAGING MC’s career (alongside several others – INCLUDING TIA = YOU NEED TO RESOLVE THAT BS PROBLEM; BECAUSE SHE SHOULD NOT HAVE BEEN THAT PASSIVE AGGRESSIVE ABOUT MC NOT HAVING ‘ENOUGH TIME’ FOR HER – It’s A. Harem! EVERYONE in it NEEDS to understand there’s JUST ONE of him. That means the more girls you add > the LESS time he’s going to get to DEAL WITH THEM) * You also went way too far with the “Agaheo” stuff; Jasmine’s not your most facially attractive female [I do not fault the body, and she’s not bad looking, she’s just not THAT attractive facially] and DID NOT need to be made that level of ugly with such renders. Agaheo doesn’t even look that good on the ones that ARE that facially attractive…

The fact you put her in such an integral position means YOU DO NOT GET TO BREAK HER CHARACTER!!! (She was understandably underconfident – the way you have written her in this update FOR NO REASON: She actually GOT exactly what she always claimed she wanted > are you TRYING to make people restart the damned game just to refuse to have anything to do with this girl??? – Underconfident DOES NOT mean “broken.” Fuck off with the cult stuff or get to the point where you go all in dude. You DO NOT have to be “broken” to want to be in someone’s harem. You set out on this premise > he’s GOING TO NEED CAPABLE/FUNCTIONAL PEOPLE AROUND HIM. Ergo – The GIRLS need to be able to get the fuck over THEIR OWN issues! Or just don’t make them bloody HAVE that many issues to start with. Also * Do not go overly into Anal stuff with Kimmy. I can see you going there with just the bullshit you pulled by pranking her. Which was ALSO RETARDED.

Why? Because the girl is already overprotective about Jasmine (who KNEW BETTER) and that whole thing just comes of massively wrong rather than funny because a) They BOTH know Kimmy’s personality type, b) she was already antagonistic to MC in the first place > you DO NOT want to reset that by being this sort of DICK, c) You haven’t even officially resolved whether she is in the harem or not; and no my friend, making Jasmine question it wasn’t the way to go about that.

= The whole thing came off as “Let me knowingly pad the run time – and BLUE BALL you until the next update” (I actually chose to lean into her “obsession” just because I figured you actually WOULD blue ball the player if I chose the normal girlfriend path > Because she’s ALREADY BLUE BALLED HIM THAT BADLY IN THE FIRST PLACE!) * If she was that hesitant about a first date and actually WANTING to do anything with MC, then it’s NO WONDER Damian never got anywhere with her. [Even asiding the fact he might be Bi or Gay… which you STILL haven’t confirmed either]

== You still have all the girls issues when you get back to help with. You’ve added now SEVERAL tag alongs that include the “rich cult girls” and the ACTUAL CULT GIRLS… and some random groupie girls/Lulu just to cement NTR Content (at least it’s Netori – but I would caution you to really think on how far and how big you want to go with the harem, you ARE going to FORGET Girls if you keep trying to add more) * There’s the Heart girls that don’t need to be there, B43PO (or whatever the fuck her group was called. There’s the nurse and that whole shebang, stella and whatever her family deal is. Ren’s MOM… Lauren (who again, does NOT need to be pursuable…) Ryker’s sister… There’s the JAX’ GIRLFRIEND THAT WANTS TO MEET MC (who I’m going to consistently remind you of as she SHOULD BE IN THE FUCKING HAREM NON-NEGOTIABLY: AFTER WHAT YOU PULLED AT AS YET THE ONLY ACTUAL BASKETBALL GAME THEY’VE YET PLAYED!!! Alongside ANY of her friends an individual player wants to join)

= There’s the issue of Skye/Pregnancy (YES. She SHOULD be pregnant either after the first time > or VERY soon and she should be HAPPY about that!!! She should actually WANT that. (Regardless of whether she would openly admit it to ANYONE but the MC) As a lead in to SHE DOES DEFINITIVELY WANT TO BE IN THE FREAKING HAREM – She was concerned about his actual acceptance > This character specifically you SHOULD NOT draw out. She is too controversial, and yes. It is SHE. Not He. Not They/Them, or any other made up bullshit) ** One of the most attractive figures in the game as far as “muscle girl” and you had to go and pull the inclusivity crap… She COULD/SHOULD have JUST been a Tomboy, with confidence issues romantically because she KNOWS what she looks like, and that most guys are intimidated by someone that looks like they could beat them in sports. (I am glad you let us pursue her and are seemingly taking it seriously – other than that anal bit, and the idea she will try to vye for Domiance with MC > DON’T. Or make her LOSE)

There is the issue of Zoe and her dependancy stuff (same thing with Elizabeth/Jasmine now too > and somehow freaking TIA. Who is arguably one of the MOST confident girls in game… Explain that to me?) There’s the issue of Bailey and Rainn (Rather Bailey SHOULD NEVER HAVE BEEN WITH RAINN TO START WITH!!! >.< AND IT SHOULD NOT NEED TO BE AN OPTION TO ACCEPT THEM TOGETHER = NOT. HAREM!) and whether the fuck or not RAIN IS IN THE HAREM… You have WAY too many maybes buddy, and it’s starting to irk me. Even Harper is basically a maybe. So is Kendra (and her WIFE > IT’S NOT A PICK BETWEEN. MC gets BOTH as THE PLAYER CHOOSES, and I don’t care what hoops you have to jump through to make that work in your mind) Eden and Hannah DO NOT need Lesbian Scenes > Hannah was already a HARD SELL in the Harem and Eden is a fucking ADD ON. They SHOULD NOT ACTIVELY BE LOOKING TO DENT EACH OTHER’S STANDINGS WITH MC. [If you want so much lesbian shit, go build a Yuri Harem. That’s NOT what this is; and you’re taking the focus away from where it properly belongs when you pull this shit as a Dev]

There’s now the question of Delilah (DO NOT REMOTELY GO NEAR THE BIBLICAL REFERENCE TO CREATE A “BAD END.” I CAN SEE YOU GOING THERE – AND IF YOU DO IT WILL STRAIGHT UP BURN THE AUDIENCE) and whether SHE will be in the harem; though you’ve given her so many “health issues” I’d assume that she should just straight up be DEAD. >.< There was also no reason to add in this cultish bullshit. Period. The rich girls playing up the “My King” thing was a meta joke. It needed to go NOWHERE ELSE. You keep talking about wanting to keep this guy grounded; and you’ve given him enough mental issues that his fall back career is basically PORN STAR/Professional BREEDER. SO decide very soon how far you want to go with ALL of that. Because if you lean into the My King as a Cult (even to joke about a “cult of personality”) then it’s NOT going to be a Grounded sort of game anymore. (There’s also the narcoleptic maid that even I almost forgot about. That alone should say how big a potential harem list you’re starting to get) Delilah was also a character that straight up Never needed to be added to the game. Willabelle was already a big stretch (as well as Captain Let Me Blue Ball You Player Even Worse Than Harper Will…) so this whole chapter of development you either need to resolve definitively and sweep entirely under the rug; or let the player CHOOSE to actively IGNORE it WITH. NO. CONSEQUENCE! [MC already has more than enough bullshit to deal with]

== Deal with Ren and the ISSUE of WHETHER SHE CAN GET PREGNANT! {I can see it being Elizabeth first, to the point of dicking the audience around that Main Girl (I called her Ren, I believe default is Jaime or something) AND Ther Mom > I would put her in the harem just to SHOW HER A MIRROR FOR HER OWN HIPOCRACY. But maybe that’s just me. You’ve already got Harper & Nat, and Zoe & Zoelle. One more mother daughter sandwich ain’t gonna break the bank mate. MC wants a “large” family; Ren’s Mom maybe could admit she always wanted 3 kids… and her husband never wanted even the first two… (I would prefer that there was NO issue of Sterility, at all… but I can also see it being more poignant an explanation of Ren’s allowances as her only means to gain the end result of what she most wanted from her relationship with MC > She can’t have his kid, so she wants EVERYONE else to go crazy with it as a massive overcompensation… Or if you want to lean into the crazy: as the very last to get pregnant, Ren will die giving birth to an actual Litter, in a reference to the “Octomom” for Meta (she went too hard at Invitro…) and either Shuna or Skye will become the new Main Girl/Harem Leader… who run the household and manage all the girls. Why those two; because both are the “trans” options = both will definitively be marked MC’s GIRLS if they take this position. So either works. Personally, I’d go inbetween, where no one dies, Shauna and Skye eventually accept their true hearts and life choices to be PERMANENTLY with MC/much more confident about their respective bodies, and EVERY girl can get pregnant as Player Chooses)

There’s still the Mackenzie issue to deal with, and Emiko who’s been ignored. There’s the teacher’s waitress sister, and the teacher herself. Which given Harper and Lauren you’re really going to have to decide if they do end up in the harem, and if so > make it ALL the damned way! No more of this halfsies bullshit. You can only cock tease so far my friend, and Harper is just about at the point I give up on it.

There’s still Ruby & Moon (who again NEEDS to go back to her more Svelte version before I’d have a damned thing to do with her… >.< ) There’s the two from the camera crew that were interesting as a duo. There’s the body guard. There’s I believe a red head movie star (the one that opened up the potential lesbian pushing for Shawna and Ren that I’m pretty sure I resoundingly IGNORED) You have Anna as well as Rachael’s adopted daughter to get officially into the harem/pregnant. There’s Penny’s personality (which is another reason I’m irked with Jasmine pulling the same bullshit) You have a FUCK TON of content to get resolved in the wings. You can actively go for at least two or three years with the plot threads you have waiting. I can see this tale easily heading to five or more, depending on what you want to do, and how well you do finish story arcs. So the best advice I can give would be decide where the hell you actually want the story to END > work to that end by focusing on what is important, and lay the fuck off the oddball shit if you’re not going to lean into it absolutely. It is tonally jarring, and will either frustrate or confuse your audience. To the point they may drop the game. In other words, use your brain.

how do i get rid of willow. i dont want this ugly shit as my sister age play gay shit. wtf is brubru

new update is out S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B7