Violation Nation

Well, since the game says On Hold, I don’t know whether you’re gonna implement anything I might suggest here, but I’ll put it out there anyway. Here goes:

= First: Zara (the teacher) does NOT get to beg us not to cum inside of her if you’re not going to a) IMPLEMENT PLAYER CHOICE as to “pregnancy content” EVERY SEX SCENE! and b) make that statement MEAN SOMETHING! (He already came in her once; there’s no reason to state that she won’t either get used to it, to the point she’ll beg him TO DO SO once the relationship progresses far enough > it SHOULD NOT be a bar of I’ve saved your ass X many times > you owe me) *** It was REALLY stupid to kidnap her [The game is NOT tagged NTR!!! So DO NOT go there. Yes, it’s possible; you DO NOT need to be that level of DICK to your audience. At all, just because something is realistically either possible or in this case VERY likely to happen by the time MC can rescue her…] Do this exactly ONE time. You get ONE shot to pull this shit. With ANY character in what should automatically JUST BE a HAREM.

= Second: You DID let us as the player choose (though it’s recommended) to cum inside the latina twit who already has a kid, and says she DOES NOT want another > that is rape. In general, the context of the scene isn’t even coercion. So MAKE. THAT. CHOICE. MEAN. SOMETHING! (She WILL get pregnant/Was OVULATING > WILL join the harem in the end. SOMETHING, and preferably BOTH things in this case)

= You’re already going to blue ball us about the needlessly added daughter. IF you’re assholish enough to say that Ex Wife is getting shagged by MC’s (now likely very much former and SHOULD ABSOLUTELY be MURDERED BY MC WITHOUT CONSEQUENCES boss by the end) employer; then IF you pull that she finds out about MC and kiddo getting shunted off to Violation Nation and you DON’T put her there too because Antagonist is a massive DICK and that level of evil – you DO need to include a PLAYER CHOICE option in game at points to RENEW their relationship; and then GET HER to the island. Then NOT care at all (because he’s GOING to protect both of them) that he is tapping their daughter/potentially BREEDING all of his females. Including her. Other than that, if you go anywhere else with her, it will count as NTR and or make her a useless add on who only SHOULD be in the harem.

= There SHOULD NOT have needed to be a MOD choice that allowed for BOTH to live when you make the player choose between the woman he’s promised to protect (and IS extorting sexual favors from in order to guarantee that privilege…) and his own fucking daughter. There was NO need to try for the batman brain fuck > that never counts anyway because he DOES usually find a way to save both of them! That is you being a MASSIVE CUNT to your audience, for no good reason. The daughter is GOING to end up being Captain Wait for me Senpai, while I blue ball any lewd content into eternity. We all know this. The ex wife WILL be worse, and probably a pain in the ass to deal with if you do have the balls to implement my suggestion. Because I know you’re going to use her as a “realistic” point to farm for drama… and very much risk running the damned story into a painted corner. Or force another bullshit choice. Here’s a tip = at Ex’s age; she’s LESS likely to be able to Breed than her daughter is. You can’t seem to decide that Daughter wasn’t born and raised in Brittain, which means she’s BARELY seen her father (there’s a scientific principle that I’m aware you’re banking on as far as her incetuous desires…) ergo the Mother WILL NOT win any ultimatum that makes him choose. Especially since Daughter has been there to protect longer, is naturally someone he’d prioritize protection to, and HASN’T ALREADY DIVORCED HIS ASS ONCE. So if you DO decide to keep Mommy not so dearest (who’s also admitted to having shacked up with someone else – which means she’s FUCKING someone else, for more money…) then DON’T try to start any bullshit in as far as being opposed to ANY relationship. Especially since you’ve set up that everyone knows the “rules” do not apply in Violation Nation specifically.

Other than that, the story has some potential. Some. It would have more if you’d straight up ADD pregnancy content, and STOP making the girls for any reason protest it. Allow for Player Choice in the ability to see such content. It also unfortunately has as much or more potential to go full super villain/off the rails with the story, so I’d caution against that. I’m impressed enough however to want to see where you might go with it. So long as you do eventually start work on it again. Since it was so recently in the updates, I’ll assume it might not be as much on hold anymore, and I’ll hope for that. I’d also say if you’re going to give the player the right to choose MC’s age; maybe design a model that looks like he COULD be 25-40. Rather than 35 at absolute best with the beard, and probably closer to 40-45 (which frankly wouldn’t be as viable in raw physical combat. No matter his “experience” or stated skill level a decade ago, as he needs to be in this situation. Harem DOES NOT DO GAME OVER, OR BAD ENDINGS!)

* There’s a reason the world’s armies transitioned to mostly GUNS in combat. Which you haven’t really allowed the player to find, or keep. Even that option has the concern of ammo, and weapon maintenance. The stealth/ambush trap stuff is all well and good; but it’s not going to work forever – and if he’s dealing with Mercs that are anywhere as skilled as they’re paid to be, THEY have the advantage. You can only even the odds so much, before you have to give MC SOMETHING that can actually let HIM win in sustained combat. Either a fortifiable hideout and enough “personnel” to properly keep it defended, a powerful FUCK OFF weapon, or an environmental deterrant that doesn’t lock them into the sanctuary location so that they can still viably find necessary food and water rations. An armored vehicle that won’t be easily damaged by the enemy weapons. Something. You didn’t make this guy Logan. There are (as yet) no super powers. So you CANNOT afford to too badly damage, or infect the party with disease or illness overall. Which is frankly the problem with trying for combat in an overly realistic, low fantasy setting.

Dev, my dude = This game is a SEX game. Full stop.

That means > Harem is the genre that is tagged – ERGO: NO OTHER MEN GET LAID BUT MC! Fucking Period.

That means: I don’t give a flying fuck which path you take > ALL of the girls eventually WILL be MC’s Women. ALL. OF. THEM! Good OR Corrupt DOES NOT FUCKING MATTER! (I can see you allowing that path JUST to fuck the player over in the end and if you do you may as well be telling EVERYONE that supports you to kiss your happy ass and thanks for the wasted cash : / )

Trying for the “Good” path DOES NOT mean I DON’T want to see the fucking lewd scenes. Or have the option to cum inside and BREED the latina bitch (when you’re insinuating EITHER WAY that MC’s Daughter wants to fuck her “Daddy” – which only works because HE didn’t RAISE HER… Scientifically. Not all of us are stupid) Vying for the Good Path means I DO NOT WANT TO GET SCREWED OVER FOR MY TIME INVESTMENT, BECAUSE YOU WANT TO BE PRICKS AT THE ENDING TO THOSE WHO CHOSE CORRUPT PATH!!! That’s ALL it means.

The daughter didn’t need to be even remotely half assedly insinuated to POTENTIALLY have a love interest = The finnish bitch SHOULD be in the harem directly AFTER Maria gets into it. Which was a scene that should have happened INSTEAD OF THE ASS FUCKING ASIAN IDIOT THAT WE’RE LIKELY NEVER GOING TO SEE AGAIN > who should’ve been vaginal at player discretion for another possible pregnancy content flag… Jesus)

Yoinking MC’s Kid away JUST to create tension is YOU being an asshole. If she dies you may as well slit the MC’s throat (that’s HOW YOU WROTE HIM TO BE!) So there was no fucking point in cock teasing something I don’t actually think you’re objectively retarded enough to pull the trigger on. Because A) It breaks your fucking protagonist irrevocably and it takes away arguably at the moment his MOST IMPORTANT WOMAN.

= I will also point out that while you’ve structured this little side bar: Zhara would be raped sixteen billion times by the time they find her (alive doesn’t mean not raped you numbskull and you were the one that wrote this bullshit island DOESN’T play by civilized rules… so she CAN be raped, without much consequence UNTIL MC gets there) >>> WHICH MEANS SOMEONE ELSE WILL GET HER PREGNANT; AND I SWEAR TO FUCK I WILL DROP THIS GAME INSTANTLY IF YOU ARE THAT LEVEL OF STUPID!!!

You DO NOT need 2 paths. there is ONE path. Warrior. Morals don’t enter into the equation of SURVIVAL. That’s your premise. So fuck off and render rewards for Good, or just screw the entire morality thing because you obviously WANT to render lewds with MC’s kid… and use her as his berserk button excuse. For fuck sakes…

EVEN on the “Good” Path I SHOULD be able to fuck Maria – just make it her suggestion in fair payment for her fucking LIFE and player discretion to cum inside and BREED her is PLAYER Choice that tells you we WANT pregnancy content (the same thing as there was NO reason to write I’ll do as I want, when Zhara asks him NOT to cum inside; which you ignored before that point in their first sex scene… so what the fuck?!? and THEN decide he pulls out for a facial. Because she ASKED him not to cum inside of her as a flag she was probably near her fucking ovulation… GGGGGRRRRRRRRRR!) I should be able to fuck EVERY FEMALE IN THE GAME NO MATTER WHAT BLOODY PATH YOU TAKE. PERIOD. I SHOULD BE ABLE TO KEEP ALL OF THE FEMALES > WITHOUT CONCERN THAT THEY’RE GETTING FUCKED/BRED BY OTHER ASSHOLES ON THE ISLAND.

That. Is a harem. So far, all you’ve got is the cock teased potential of a half assed jack in the box that MIGHT be a harem… as long as you’re okay with MC being a massive cuck if you take three seconds to think about what actually amoral assholes would realistically do to a captured female in a no holds barred premise. Come. The fuck. On…

GET. TO. SAVING. ZHARA!!! SOON. And do not dare to imply a DAMNED THING SEXUAL happened to her at all. That’s how you apologize to the fan base, WHILE building the scenes INTO the Good path, that should already fucking be there. At this point guys, you might as well call the boyscout route the “Safe For Work” route and be done with it. Urgh!

still waiting for an update….