Opening to Love

This is not the first time I’ve had to amend the “final word” comment –

There is a very specific REASON that a Dating Sim can have a Harem PATH; but a Harem Tagged game should NEVER have the “dating sim” tag accompanied. It’s also very simple.

Dating Sim = I am GOING to FORCE you as the player to CHOOSE ONE GIRL. At some point. It doesn’t matter when – it WILL happen.

Harem = You ARE ALLOWED to go with ALL and or ANY of the girls you actually choose to engage with (and usually get as much time as you need/want to complete their fucking story arcs)

Do you really not see the problem?

That one point where you BREAK the idea of it BEING a harem by making MC choose (and then as a MASSIVE DICK MOVE: You state all the other choices are “lost” from his phone > That does NOT happen by magic numbnuts. He would actively have to DELETE them, or break the bloody thing, or put it near a magnet = I am a luddite, and I know this * You are trying too hard to be an asshat to those that absolutely DO want this to be a harem game!!!)

Olivia is a “former” porn star – there is no such thing as a FORMER porn star: That is the stigma. She will ALWAYS be a porn star. You stating if we choose that route that she’s going to move soon regardless is a serious WHY THE FUCK IS SHE EVEN IN THE GAME THEN?!?

Rose is 45 – so outright you’re a dumbass that can’t be bothered with pregnancy content; and name me ONE 45 year old that looks that shredded. I’ll wait. I’ve got about three years to catch up to her. (She DID hesitate when she said she was a personal trainer and her running off – for no good reason was NOT a good showing on HER part; to keep The Player’s investment!) You have her fucking some asshole with a six pack > so I doubt highly that’s your MC. And if so she’s in the exact same boat as Olivia, and you really need to rethink the entire game.

Fiona is you being an abject douche to your player base. Period. Everything about the girl says RUN. You’d know that if you had one functioning braincell. Same with Lucy. Just, jesus you must watch too much porn dude.

Sarah is hot and cold (the right answers are basically be open but don’t push – and let go. You DO NOT DO THIS TO THE AUDIENCE!!! > She would absolutely be a self fulfilling prophecy in real life – because of MIXED FUCKING MESSAGES!!! [And frankly her whole personality would NOT gel with the notion of a harem. She does NOT have that confidence; she would absolutely be shattered or too possessive so she DOES NOT BELONG IN THE FUCKING GAME!]

Penelope – is apparently the best friend who absolutely IS an idiot. Of epic proportions; because she goes out of her way to NOT understand SHE should just BE his fucking girlfriend to start with. Problem Solved. No unnecessary dating bullshit; no crazy assholes who are absolutely fucking other people involved. (And why mention Arthur’s sister – unless you’re going to introduce her at some point > just to cause more drama!)

This whole game is a clusterfuck of every single one of you as presented is EXACTLY WHY men don’t seek girlfriends any more. Why we won’t easily date, and what the hell is wrong with “feminism” (it’s misandry now, not actual feminism)/social politics/Woke and or “empowerment” as a concept. It used to mean something. It used to be a good thing… When there was something to actually fight for. Now it’s just a pointed sword; and every idiot thinks a dildo can do the same job. But you still want us to chase. You still want us to want you. It fucking offends you when we don’t. Guess what? No guy will KEEP and or BE LOYAL TO the town’s fucking doorknob. >.< That’s not harem; and it shouldn’t be a dating sim either. Until you get even that simple point my friend, I objectively reserve the right to call you every shade of literal retard.

Okay – Olivia no longer gets to be ANY kind of LOVE INTEREST (she’s getting FUCKED by SOMEONE WHO IS NOT THE MAIN CHARACTER > IN WHAT YOU CALL A FUCKING “HAREM” TAGGED GAME!!!)

If you think that’s what Harem is asshole = you’re wrong, and you just killed ANY value that bitch had to most people that enjoy the harem genre. >.< Dumbfuck.

First – if you’re going to introduce (in a HAREM TAGGED GAME!) a girl who is the “office romance” flag > YOU do NOT get to decide it’s “not going to happen.” The PLAYER decides that Genius. It’s your job to write her to be accepting of MC’s advances > depending on what path the player tries with her.

Which second – Fuck absolutely right off with the pink haired punk. Mind games are NOT a good way to endear ANYONE and that kind of girl is NOT welcome. She is trouble. She is NOT going to be worth the pursuit; and you need to rework her whole damned intro as to be CLEAR about what she actually DOES want = or absolutely she CAN fuck right off. (The fact that you wrote this as a choice means you know that you’re being a dick outright with presentation of this character)

Third – you make the “best friend” freak out on MC because he was “late” – MC did NOT have to be late; that’s your call; and it’s NOT a good way to endear the audience to HER as a character. At all. If she’s an option to claim (and in a harem game she BETTER be, otherwise there’s NO good reason for her to be this damned pushy about HIS love life) that’s NOT a good look.

And that’s just the first three. Nevermind the pic above that shows cosplay of the witch from Dragon’s Crown without the rack to actually pull it off.

Also – it would take MC exactly two fucking seconds after walking out of the club and seeing her home to DELETE the damned app and be done with it, if she IS going to be that much of a prick. He CAN stop contact – sever ties and tell Penelope to fuck absolutely right off.

That’s more a problem with YOUR writing (assuming fuckwit has no spine – or that she should be wearing the pants in this relationship/WILL get to walk all over him just because she MIGHT be willing, at whatever point you decide, to actually fuck him. Once in a blue moon) more than her as a character. Tone it the fuck down – make it seem like she genuinely gives a fuck (or you know, actually WANTS to BE the one fucking him…) and then maybe you have grounds to make Penelope HALF that pushy.

Given even the first 3 girls in your game: I can SEE exactly why the MC’s still single. The first two he interacts with at all; one pops her tits out and accuses HIM of being the perverted/horny one, and the other who is his “best friend” decides that entitles her to run his life and rip his head off when he could’ve just been held up by traffic. You do know that if SHE was the one an hour late and he spoke to her that way he’d have a black eye, a drink all over his shirt or she would’ve just turned around to walk right back out the door. Right?

Use. YOUR. Brain. I will hope you’re not actually having the AI write this… but honestly if this is what you’ve got this early into the damned game; maybe it’d be better if you did let the bloody computer write it for you. : /