Leviathan

First – if this is a harem; there better NOT be choices that negate a girl’s path – and if they are MARK. THEM. OUT!

Second – The nun scene: It’d better be the same damned girl… You DO NOT cock tease like that unless you WANT to piss the audience off. (I’m forgiving you once – if she’s just a one off; say so, and NEVER put me in a fucking church again. If she’s not = she gets to be bent over her own desk, and made the next “holy” mother of MC’s child, at whatever point you get around to that)

Third – The chop Shop: Going Hardware – DO NOT ask me if I’m a gunslinger or a BRAWLERm and then NOT let me pick I’m a fucking BRAWLER!!! >.< If you ask a question to the player = it’s a CHOICE option! How is that hard? (Dude the cyberpunk body mod bullshit is always about WHAT BUILD YOU WANT TO BE… You as the Dev DO NOT MAKE THAT CHOICE FOR THE PLAYER) * Render both versions; or don’t even fucking ask.

Four – Going with the look at her tits option seems to piss Strea off (she about nukes David’s head for that > and he better end up GAY or Asexual; because there DOES NOT need to be another male in a HAREM game that has even a REMOTE chance to get laid that the player can or will see * He’s an UNNECESSARY RED FLAG: who should be a GIRL)

Five: You’re combining One Piece with Pacific Rim; you NEED to make antagonists the party – and PARTICULARLY THE MC – can actually beat. Preferably without needing Dues Ex bullshit every single fight. If the girls are there to serve a purpose and round out the team > Great. But eventually you’re GOING to need to let MC bend them all over a fucking table WITHOUT CONSEQUENCE as the player chooses, and BREED with them. Other than that you don’t have a Harem. You have a giant set of “Infinite” blue balls. [Because it would’ve killed you to render a rice ball that had a bite out of it?!? Calling it “Synth” would’ve been a better idea for believability. Though cyberpunk franchise probably would sue you, so something like synthetic would be needed]

Also – DUMBFUCK: IF the doctor dipshit decides to ASK for MC to HELP HER NOT GET BENT OVER TABLE AND ASS RAPED BY A PYSCHO = that’s your FUCKING CUE to LET. THE PLAYER. BE. SPECIAL!!! (She’s not going to get in the harem by being the I can save MYSELF type – or a snarky asshole!)

= That is literally YOU being a cock teasing dick about whatever the fuck you pulled with the SUITCASE > You get ONE. Just one. The next fucking time that shit happens I’m not playing any farther because I can already tell what your aim is with this bullshit and there’s NO reason for all the girls to want his “massive horse cock” if he’s going to be the spineless little BITCH that gets to go down in every fucking fight when they actually NEED. HIM. TO. WIN >. but also willing to share the ONE guy she wants, because he IS worth it to her, and IS a fucking virgin who also wants a BIG family. That, is the Unicorn – and THAT is what most guys who like harem actually want out of it)

You are rapidly doing more to piss me off with this story than to keep anyone invested. There is ONLY so far that you can cock tease – even with a “slow burn.” Tension is a rubber band; you stretch too far, and it WILL break. Then you get apathy, and that will cost you subs, because players WILL tap out.

= There. IS. NO. POINT. TO OFFERING A CHOICE TO LOOK: if you’re going to be a massive DICK to the player every fucking time they DO. You assholes KNOW what the fuck we’re here for… Either allow the render to take place WITHOUT THE GIRL BEING A PRICK FOR ACTUALLY SHOWING INTEREST OR FUCK RIGHT OFF WITH THE WHOLE CONCEPT!!! > That’s at least twice and perhaps three fucking times. Third strike with Doctor I’m NEVER GETTING LAID NOW. You’re done.