Knockout Master

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Update Round 11 Please

Played all the way to the end; for several included females that BARELY get any screen time (Alice takes up way more than she should when Leah is also pregnant)

= Scarlett DOES NOT need to be in the game and is a massive cock block to her kid. With the shit she’s pulled if you were any sort of realistic (and we WILL get to the dumbassed I’m Saving Myself for Marriage but I’ll let you fuck me in the ass bit… >.< KNOCK. UP. MASTER!!! Dick) then JUST the fact she was WILLING to work as even a STRIPPER says she doesn’t get to be ANY sort of judgmental about what her daughter does with whom.

[He’s also a professional BOXER she was worried about being violent with her daughter; who now signs her paycheck directly > because I figured that was the correct path to PUT her in the harem; though I was DAMNED tempted to just walk away from Rose – because that’s exactly what these two dense dipshits actually DESERVE! STOP. THREATENING HIM. WITH. DEATH > A) Very illegal; he already has a paid security team and she CAN and WILL go to prison for it B) What part of he’s bigger and stronger and possibly “prone to violence” makes her think it’s at all smart to tell Captain Simp R Us to his fucking FACE that she will kill him?!? She has to be alive to try it. Genius] ** Threats are not any more attractive from a woman than from a man; and most men WILL take it seriously. Knock it the fuck off – or let me tell the pair of them directly; you can both either let me bend you and breed you to KEEP, and I will take care of you financially for the rest of your lives… or you can both fuck absolutely right off and let the best chance you’ll ever know for a MUCH easier life walk right out the door because Mommy can’t tell who should wear the pants in a relationship and Baby Girl doesn’t understand that SEX WAS THE LITERAL POINT OF MARRIAGE IN THE MOST ANCIENT POSSIBLE SENSE. IE: The second he puts himself INTO HER PUSSY TO POTENTIALLY BREED > THEY. ARE. MARRIED. GRRRRRRRRRRR!

= Harley: Why is she here, other than to remind us that Violet is supposed to be a Lesbian (who apparently went through “conversion therapy” and is much more interested in JUST ONE MAN THANKFULLY – BUT STILL A MASSIVE SPOILED ASSHOLE WHO DOES NOT GET TO BE DOMINANT!!!) Read: She SHOULD be straight up BI. You are done. No convoluted offensive and retarded message needed. Focused on Females, and THE MC as her “hero worship one off” guy. That’s her preference. All you needed done. But no. You couldn’t do that. You had to waste SO MUCH TIME COCK TEASING THAT SHE’S NOT EVEN MORE THAN FOREPLAY – and has to wait to PROPERLY get into the fucking harem until your next damned game. To the point that Harley is there as a Side Chick who COULD/SHOULD be in the fucking harem > but she gets no bloody screen time. So too bad if you might like a little Siamese in your twin ship.

= Ashley – I swear to unholy fuck if you do ANYTHING with this bitch to fuck up things between MC and Violet even if I never play your “next game” I will strangle you telepathically with the cord to your own damned keyboard. (I already want to…) She. Does. NOT. Belong. In this. Game! Needless add on and unnecessary complication. I can already see you being a massive prick here for no good reason.

= Kylie > Why. The FUCK. Is she in the game. At all. Better question: Why is she on the main damned page??? If I was supposed to NOT save Mike to get her into the harem > you needed to be MUCH more clear about that. She straight up says they’re not dating but you only let MC get ONE FUCKING POINT with her in the entire freaking run of TWO DAMNED SEASONS!!! (Crazy cat lady is literally all she’s going to end up at this point because I WILL drop her ass if you don’t get somewhere with it VERY. SOON > IF I bother actually giving your next game a shot. Which will be FAR on my blackest back burner Dude) ** BEST FRIEND DOES NOT NEED A GIRL. THAT BREAKS AN UNWRITTEN WELL KNOWN RULE IN HAREM AS A GENRE – Unless MC CAN/WILL be “stealing” her Which also REQUIRES you be clear as to her being WILLING to be “stolen.” Jackass.

Doctor Candy (Really should’ve been Emma’s name; or Rachael… Or Natasha at this point. Don’t act like you’re more subtle; I’ve read your writing) Keeps telling ASSHAT NOT TO GET HIT IN THE HEAD… First thing you do is treat chucklefuck like you think he’s somehow Clark Fucking Kent!!! >.< There is NO POINT to adding a doctor into the game if you are just going to write that he does whatever the fuck he wants anyway.

Daria? (Why?!?) *** You NEED to let this one STILL be able to get pregnant. I was born lightly physically disabled you asshole; and unless you grew up like I did, or went through what she did from that accident you DO NOT have the right to pretend you know a damned thing about our scars. Or what it costs to be brave enough to let someone in. To know you might never get the CHANCE to breed; because the world sees you as LESS. When I say I’m Dom; it’s not a joke > it’s how I fucking SURVIVED. You dipshits think it’s a role or a game. It’s not. It’s who you are. How you are. It’s not a light switch. It’s not an optional thing brick for brains. So if you’re GOING to put a girl this wounded in the game; you let me treat her like the princess she should be > let me build with her a home and a family, and GIVE her that right. To self worth. Regardless and you let NO ONE FUCKING INTERFERE WITH THAT FOR SOME MISPLACED BULLSHIT OVERPROTECTIVE/FEMALE EMPOWERMENT CRAP! There are some character troupes you do not need to put into a game, because unless you’ve LIVED that life, you will not do it justice and you are actively INSULTING those who DO live like that. Which is my problem with “Woke.” Inclusion by MERIT is welcome. Diversity for appreciation of culture in general and variance of personality/viewpoint, is welcome. It IS NOT. A MORAL LESSON!

Like I said there were two other strippers/hookers (for no good reason) That didn’t really need to be in the game; who might or not become Harem Members? At this point fuck knows. There’s the nurse… who is just there. That stupid injection and those fucking pills could give him literal Regenerative Powers like Wolverine > and they might have to the further you go. You do realize that Mohamed Ali ended up with Parkinsons? Hell look up how most of the truly great boxers went out. It wasn’t pleasant. Liam DOES NOT need to survive to come back again; his name ain’t Freddy Kruger, or Count Fucking Dracula. There DOES NOT need to be more drama than you’ve already got JUST trying to get even HALF of the listed female assholes INTO his fucking harem. But you do whatever you want. You will anyway. It’s on you if the quality of work is all but in the toilet because you have an obvious agenda, and wouldn’t know what it actually takes in MINDSET and PERSONALITY to be a World Championship Boxer if your head wasn’t shoved directly up your ass, half way to your throat. All you’ve got here is a crazy assed billionaire who apparently legit hates himself and wants to die badly. Or go out of his mind even harder, chasing a bunch of women who couldn’t pick green or red out of traffic light, as far as what they actually want from him.

Leah > I want to be independant and DOMME (I picked SUBMISSIVE YOU DIPSHIT – SHE WASN’T IN MOST CASES) BUT I have no problem leeching off you as long as I get to say it was all me and my dream… : /

Alice > Damsel in Dis Dress. Princess Peach (and I’m not talking about her ass) but, I swear I’m not a gold digger… How much did we spend renovating the appartment. Who buys all the groceries? She doesn’t pay rent, and they’re not even actually married (Common law might be debated at this point) She’s Anna Nicole Smith, without the looks.

Rose > Is exactly the sort of spoiled, sheltered little princess ANY guy with half a brain will stay away from. Because of an “over protective” parent. Bending half way in the WRONG way and expecting him to be “patient” until marriage is YOU making her find the Unicorn. When she broke up with MC – THAT was the END of her actual involvement in the game. Period. Same with her Mom. (Who should never have been in the game to start with)

Violet > The exact reason people like me HATE the “Woke.” Even if with more subtlety and actual open-mindedness you preach, most of us might genuinely agree with the basic principles (there was a reason the old X-Men comics were masterpieces and wildly popular…) She is genuinely an attractive character physically; and now you have the gall o use that as the sword she’s wielding against MC to make HIM SUBMIT to HER > BECAUSE HIS SISTER WAS AN ASSHOLE?!? There are not enough words for how many ways this character as written can fuck entirely off.

Candy DID NOT need to be 42 years old: she could be 35 and still be the oldest current semi Harem member. That’s you being colossally retarded. Full stop. (Even specialized, military career from 18 to 20 > Medical degree for 8 years to be 28 > low ball 4 years residency training for specialty as a prodigy > 3 years as an actual doctor at said hospital – you could even argue just the one year so far, and make her 33 years old) She genuinely did NOT need to be in the game regardless; since you’re actively making MC ignore every thing she’s told him NOT to do!

Nobby, Jesus do I hope you were being incredibly sarcastic…

Problem One:

There are thus far TWO girls – in a HAREM tagged game. One has commitment issues; the other has OVER commitment issues. Which aren’t hers, but we’ll get there. [That’s outside of the fact there’s ONE girl featured far too prominently in most of this site’s posted pictures]

= The guy is stated to be insanely rich (I don’t give a fuck if you call him wealthy or Scrooge fucking McDuck Dev… and most people wouldn’t differentiate) to the point of ridiculous. This is not his problem > His problem is literally the ONLY reason the girls want him is that he has a HORSE COCK and is effectively their walking bank account.

== The Ex Boyfriend:

> First, you state clearly that he was clocked in the head out of nowhere. He was actually physically attacked – and presumptively (since physical violence is far more common as a crime against MEN > he was going to be beaten or dead while she would MUCH MORE LIKELY have survived the rape you stated that she was going to get – which is still you being a dick) fled.

> You THEN mention not only did he flee; he was BEING CHASED by a SECOND ASSAILANT!!! (DUMBASS) So he WASN’T fleeing because he was a coward = He was fleeing because he was still VERY MUCH MORE LIKELY IN DANGER OF GETTING HIS ASS KICKED OR BEING DEAD >.<

= You THEN have for ALICE’s Character the UNMITIGATED GALL to say MC could be a monster that would do the same as X attacker was going to (Not smart. Not at all) At that point if Richie Rich wasn’t so busy playing Captain Uber Simp to a female that’s actually the LEAST attractively rendered of the two presented girls thus far [And factually looks closer to 32 than 23…] he SHOULD have said; and on that note, have a good night miss. If that’s how you feel I’m pretty sure you can take it from here and find your own way home. I just saved your ass, by your own admission. (There would be NO DEVELOPMENT from that point with her fucking character if you had a functioning brain cell… but I’ve regrettably read your writing, I’m not counting on it)

Side point: You don’t get to cheekily change the name of the game from Knock Out Master to Knock Up Master if the first sex option presented (way too soon – with the “Friends With Benefits because GOD FORBID I come out and admit I DEFINITELY WANT TO MARRY YOUR DENSE ASS!” Character) is On her Face, or On her ass. You ain’t knocking anyone up, if it ain’t INSIDE of her pussy. Genius.

= You have them play house for two seconds: Literally as stated TWO fucking days before Captain Fuck This Shit I’m Out somehow (and you point this out DIRECTLY FUCKING AFTERWARD!!!) FINDS Alice. Just to create some dumb ass “foreshadowing” [You must think your audience needs to be hit in the head with a two by four to get the point – or you do, it’s THAT obvious] about him being a “stalker.” Here’s a tip > Unless he has a GUN or a KNIFE/Crowbar… Buddy’s presumably bigger. Stronger, Faster and a trained BOXER. He can’t stalk her if he’s a dead man. And it’s a harem game. So there should NEVER be a fight that your MC CAN’T win.

>> You also ran the risk of having Alice Bugger off outright by having Leah pull the shit she did (you CANNOT just sweep that under the rug given Alice’s recent scarring; and exactly how HURTFUL all of that insinuation is. Leah has NO ACTUAL CLAIM on MC to speak of – and if my “friend with benefits” EVER pulled that shit on another girl just to cock block me, guess what she STOPS being?!?) There were two major break points with both characters that make them even outside of the insanely overt mercenary tendencies they have, incredibly UNATTRACTIVE. To the point it should have viably ENDED both relationships, and one was only barely begun to start with.

And I’m not even that far past the fucking introduction…

Also – name me one man past the age of 15 years old that would legitimately say to his intended paramour that he was in the middle of taking a shit and has a “turtle head” (It took me a minute to even figure out what the fuck you meant – that’s how off tone it was) That is absolutely YOU being stupid and insanely immature. (There’s also very few people who weren’t legitimately LEGALLY BLIND who would confuse super glue for eye drops) So I’m going to play until the next sex scene = and if it’s as disappointing as Leah’s first one, I’m not bothering with any further content. Either from this, your intended sequel, or any other game you create. That’s how little respect I have for your supposed abilities as a writer.