Due to My New Situation, I Have to Corrupt My Friend’s Harem!

The general idea is:

Let me subvert the common troupes of a harem protagonist (because I disdain them – and my dude; we ALL hate that authors usually write the protagonist to be dense, celibate motherfuckers who are RETARDEDLY KIND to females that don’t deserve it… and end up picking first girl because First Girl is Bestest Gurl, durh! – Like you keep writing about Ema = your work isn’t special) AND let me TRY to subvert as well as PLAY with NTR concepts; at the same time, because I don’t fucking have the BALLS to actually take the consequences.

= 75 fucking main story events > SEVENTY FIVE OF THEM. GOD. DAMN. IT. And this asshole’s STILL NOT gotten the FOUR girls on board with him being the ACTUAL harem leader. Gah! Literally half of the way throug the main story quests and we’ve not even gotten to JUST THE TIP!

Dude, your plot is – Hi My Name is MC – today I will be playing the absolutely UNNECESSARY role of Cyrano De Bergerac, with Naoki as Christian. Only this time not only is Christian absolutely as hopeless and dense as he is in the classic tale = he’s also an abject asshole. So of course it’s fine that Cyrano goes Lex Luthor meets Freddy Kruegar on “His” Girls (When again you’re mistaking the fact the girls would be AWARE on some level that MC is the one that “Got Them Together” with Naoki in the first place > It was ALWAYS HIM THEY FUCKING WANTED!!! * Do you think the audience is as retarded as you’ve written Noaki? Hell, the fact it was MC who put them with Naoki in the first place is the ONLY reason it works at all that the girls might genuinely be falling for MC OUTSIDE of the mind muckery like you tried to insinuate with Ai in the first place)

= You decided that it should ONLY be 4 girls, because you know damned well you planned to blue ball us into eternity and beyond. No wait, I meant infinity. Oh well. There’s a difference brother between “slow burn,” and are you willing to let me intentionally TRY to freeze your damned nuts right off. It could be 5,6,7 or 8. It could be 10, and as long as you actually GOT to the fucking Sex content [The ACTUAL SEX – NOTHING BUT INTERCOURSE COUNTS AS A FUCKING SEX SCENE. That’s why they call them “Lewd” or “H scenes.” Seriously, at least Ema SHOULD have been bent over and rut on to BREED by now. She is all but contractually MC’s Bitch, not just his wife. You started the BDSM bullshit – you don’t get to go halfsies on it. Not wanting to “break” them, while TRYING to break them is YOU being an arrogant idiot.

The 4 girls are as follows:

Chikari: I’m a dense fuckwit who’s WAY too trusting, and the Fit Girl. Yay! (At least this girl was A) Willing and B) Wants to be in the freaking Harem)

Ema: I’m the lonely little rich bitch who’s so broken I can’t even tell that I’m not actually dominant just because “Daddy” (Who looks WAY too much like a girl…) says I am. It’s not even closet sub. She’s just straight up the Break Me type of sub (which is the most dangerous/untrustworthy type)

Ai: My dude – the only thing that saves this one is I know damned well that’s an actual name in either Chinese or Japanese, possibly both with different meanings. A. I. I, Robot? Do Robots Dream of Electric Sheep. If I only had a heart… I could go on. Super Smart, very likely on the spectrum (Aspergers is NOT common in females, but it’s also very much not impossible) Basically she’s the Foreigner song. I want to know what love is; I DO actually very much Want You to SHOW me… I just also REALLY suck at expressing it.

And then Captain I dun fucked up so hard that I started this whole damned mess in the first place. Because I don’t want to admit that I failed eventually at being Cersei Lannister, but presumably still a virgin. : / Come the fuck on man.

That’s the best you can do for the core females in a harem game? Standard troupe-y bullshit that’s been done a hundred times over, and a living breathing MONKEY WRENCH who’s all but certain to either fuck up the harem, or doesn’t actually deserve to be part of it. Really?

= The mind control thing was not a point you should’ve done. It says I can’t find the actual intelligent way to convince someone of my argument or GENUINELY make them like me; so fuck it. Ima fry your damned brain into believing that you want to fuck me like an animal.

= It would actually have been more funny, and still accomplished the same result frankly if you’d subverted my expectations about potential NTR concerns (which again Netori is the ONLY acceptable variant in a Harem setting, and even then SPARINGLY) by giving Naoki TOO BIG of a cock. Like that literally will not fit in a woman that it’s over six feet tall, and built muscle bound. So none of these girls CAN fuck him, or would be willing to try to (There’s a reason the dicks look like they do in Porn – aside from it’s mostly camera angles or surgery that no one wants to think of – and there’s a reason those guys get into porn. Most girls aren’t looking to get banged by a tree trunk, or something that doubles as her actual forearm) * There’s also the point that women tend to think differently about the “size matters” issue; it does > they usually prefer Girth. WE tend to think it’s length.

= Giving Captain I’m useless without the Actual Fucking Protagonist (who now legitimately and justifiably hates me… because I was absolutely a prick) a micropeen wasn’t the best way to handle things. Hell, you could’ve made him uber religious, or entirely superstitious and mentally broken that way. The way you did it CAN be taken as passive aggressively insulting your own audience. Just for enjoying the genre in general. But you probably didn’t think of that, did you bright guy.

And frankly I’d write Touka or whatever the fuck her name is DIRECTLY out of the fucking game if she’s going to be THIS much of an actual problem. She’s literally a brick wall to the PLAYER. Not the MC. She’s one you DON’T need. (And if the MC’s ire is directly toward mostly her in the first place – yes. Break the fuck out of Naoki because he deserves it; but DESTROY her. Leave her alone: abandoned, ripped to shreds emotionally and spiritually, and REND HER FUCKING DREAM OF EVER BEING A GOOD PERSON) Why? Because she fish-tailed on MC to begin with, from being afraid of HERSELF. Not the MC. You’ve written her to be smart enough to know exactly what the fuck she really is, and it’s incredibly frustrating to the point most guys would straight up say if you want to lie to yourself this much then go do whatever you want… and don’t come to me when you’re miserable twenty years down the road. This person deserves every bad thing that SHOULD absolutely fucking happen to her. Period. Because you’ve written her to be a coward, and blindly obstinate. To the point she’ll shoot herself in the foot every time and make the whole damned thing SO much harder than it has to be > and I can see you purposely writing in an ending where she goes nuts and knifes everyone JUST to deny who she really is, because you think that’s Ironic. Or super smart or something. Just because you likely didn’t want this to really BE a harem in the first place. Or you wouldn’t be taking so damned long to get the fuck on with it and GET. TO. THE. ACTUAL. HAREM. CONTENT!

Seriously asshole, if you haven’t at least made ONE of the girls (I would prefer ALL of them) FUCK the MC even ONCE by the time I get to 100 main story events, I am going to delete the damned game and never play another update. It won’t be worth it. Because IF you were to add Pregnancy Content (which you absolutely can, could and should…) I’d bet on you mucking around to blue ball the hell out of that even harder.

the game is good, 7/10, sadly there is basically no choice that u can make to change dialoge or get a new scene and even when the game gave u a choice, there’s just a correct answer and a wrong one, there’s no path beside the main one, again, the game is good, but this is basically a knetic novel and the game don’t really explore a fetish, is a soft dom mc, is up to you if you like it or maybe you prefer something else.