Being An Adventurer Is Not Always The Best

First; the only actual sex scene I was able to access was NTR – it doesn’t matter if I have the option to turn it off, it’s an OVERCOMPLICATION!

This SHOULD properly be a harem game; since you have more than three women listed that will be pursuable – but given the FIRST quest you give me to build character points with the Red headed Twin who supposedly likes me enough to antagonise your clear “best girl” from the start = I do not know why she wasn’t already willing to just FUCK ME! >.<

MAIN. CHARACTER. WINS. It doesn’t have to be flawless, but it should be unquestionably his victory. In EVERY case. Also; do NOT start any of the listed females to pursue as fucking married. That’s just restrictive and stupid. They are already flagged as Captain Blue Balls in that case. I don’t care how much exercise she does or whose mom she is, or whether the daughter will eventually join in. Just… Jesus.

There is NO debate. Other than that you are just viciously being an asshole. Either to the character or your audience and usually both. You do not even give a hint as to where to GET bat wings. Or the Ore. The one glowing wood point I found gave me 2 out of 10 req. That’s just bad programming, and a pain in the rear that says to me the girl and the game are not going to be worth my time.

Frankly I would say remove the NTR completely. Fuck the option to turn it off; and stick to ONE. ONE item at a time for fetch quest bullshit. Also screw your labyrinthine maps. They are crap. Make a functional map that clearly marks where the fuck the quest item is, and it would be far easier to get anywhere. While we’re on it; do NOT tie a monetary valued quest into the very next CHARACTER quest (being supposedly optional but effectively not really) into LOSING every fucking red cent you just earned with NO means suggested to freaking get it back. There’s also the point MC is SUPPOSED to be training for this BS festival which I am betting you’re just going to fucking humiliate him at. Because Mommy was the Bestest Adventurar Evar! Go fuck yourself for the “lack of motivation, low energy” bullshit. Why don’t you just call him freaking impotent and be done with it. Because miss I’m going to insult the hell out of my “best friend” that I’m signposting so hard I want to bone down with if he wasn’t absolutely god damned dense, isn’t going to get what she wants.

The first fucking choice you had to let the Player Choose a sex option that the red headed VIRGIN twin (which fuck you – they both should be, and I DON’T care how good she thinks the sex is… if she thinks the guy is an asshole, do NOT make her that level of submissive. It doesn’t mean doormat, or automatic sex slave… and again IT. SHOULD. BE. A. HAREM! Where for all the effort the player will have to put in; the only sex that gets seen or chosen belongs to THE MC, and the girls he chooses to call his own. You already lost massive points for RPGM. It’s a shit system, it’s not intuitive, the graphics are shit in general and that’s not down to the artist. It’s just not fun as a creation tool. It’s not user friendly. Besides that you warn straight up of NTR being “unavoidable” so again. Fuck. That. All the way, and twice on Sundays. There is no such thing as a story that NEEDS to have NTR. Not when you’re actively setting it up to look like it SHOULD be a HAREM. When quite frankly the MC who is fairly useless as far as I can tell from the start – even though you’re literally writing his Mom to be, and look like Wonder Woman – is going to have to do ALL of the grinding associated with the Harem Genre. To get probably what amounts to maybe 3 minutes of scenes where the player isn’t going to be able to choose where they finish; of if Pregnancy is what they want. [It’s also REALLY assholish to do a Don’t Cum Inside me! scene where you don’t even see if he does… and I still think she would be best left for the MC to Choose whether he will pursue in ALL cases if you really feel you MUST do NTR, the females in question. Otherwise he’s not a fucking adventurer. He never will be, and that’s the end point. So it will be a really, god damned short story.

At this point, I’d normally say there is potential, but I just don’t see it. The first thing you went out of your way to do was make the MC feel weak. Make the audience feel weak. Then show his best friend getting Blue Balled by a sub slut that seems like a nice girl because you want her to be some evil asshole’s bitch? No. You set the Tsundere who wishes MC would pin her to the wall and pound a baby into her guts, against the redhead to what; recall Yennifer and Triss? They’re both set to cock block him and NO. There should be no other visible option for who they can fuck in a tab called Relationships. The only one most players WILL care about, especially if they choose not to indulge with a specific female is the one that’s tied to MC. Because it’s tied explicitly to their own choice. Which you are disrespecting if you show any other type of scene with the girl fucking someone else. It’s really not that hard to get this shit right. But at the end of the day, you’re likely too far in to bother changing the system. You probably don’t give a frig how many potential players you might piss off and if that’s your thing. Fine. Fair enough. But I can tell you right now, it will be the LONE time I download this game. Because there IS no REWARD. You can make the stick as big as you want, to go on for as long as you want… but it means fuck all for a baseball bat, if there’s not an actual carrot at the end of it. And I’m not talking about the virgin twin’s muffin top. Which I will probably never get to see at any rate. Even if I could complete the damned side quest to get her to admit she freaking wants to bone down. : /