Abyssal Lust

Let’s set aside the fact there are 3 different “versions” of how to “play” this fucking game just to start…

> The VN version doesn’t mean if there’s a point about a GIRL where it looks like MC SHOULD have a CHOICE: I want to let YOU as the DEV answer for me = Give. ME. The Fucking. Choice! (If you pull no choices when it comes to do we have sex; or cumming inside the girls – that’s REALLY going to piss people off)

Especially since basically right on the first day you fuck up SEVERAL times: and go too far out of your way to involve a Supernatural Force that MC has NO ACTUAL WAY TO FUCKING FIGHT! >.< (The butchery was NOT about “Dominance” asshat – it was the PRETENSION to Dominance. A actual Dominant would value control of THEMSELVES over every other sort. This was JUST an asshole who wants to think they’re dominant. If you DON’T understand the TRUTHS of something you’re playing with, STOP trying to play like you know ANYTHING about it) ** An ACTUAL Detective knows NOT to touch the fucking body WITHOUT gloves (you didn’t show he was wearing) otherwise Forensics would have his skull for a bowl of candies. YOU literally just made him TAINT the evidence. As a 18-19 year old looking asshat who’s supposedly been a Detective for YEARS. How??? Is he a Cultivator: is he factually fucking IMMORTAL???

>> Counterpoint to your bullshit they need time to grieve (which would be arranged AFTER the fucking questioning as counselling to be offfered = TIME. IS. OF. THE. ESSENCE! It’s not “wait a few days” it’s WE have a fucking KILLER that just ripped apart one of our students and who knows who’s next. She would absolutely WANT the Detectives to be done their investigation as QUICKLY as fucking possible – because that also gets them out of her fucking hair. She would ALLOW the girls to be interviewed the same day; because same day, or next week it doesn’t matter. They’re not getting any more traumatized by this >>> BUT THEY ARE IN DANGER! Dumbass.

> Ariel doesn’t need to be the first girl he finds – who he ALREADY had a past with. IF this is GOING to be a Harem; FIRST = I DON’T CARE WHAT FUCKING SORT OF STORY YOU MEAN TO WRITE: YOU. DO. NOT. FUCK. UP. THE. HAREM!!! None of them are in actual danger unless MC/Player CHOOSES not to engage them into the harem. Period. This is EXACTLY why you never create an antagonist the MC has NO HOPE of fucking beating…

> If it’s GOING to be a Harem = I GET THE CHOICE OF EACH GIRL BEING IN IT! Not YOU as the Dev. That’s not how this genre works. Only the BAD games make the assumption that the MC is GOING to want to fuck every woman in the game because they exist. Jesus.

> You have too many tags that don’t need to be here; and Pregnancy IS NOT on that list. If you add it, some of the other bullshit might be MUCH easier to take. Because you ARE ACTIVELY TRYING TOO HARD TO FUCK EVERYTHING UP. For no reason. Even on JUST the first goddamned day!!! You have the primordial asshat saying I can help you a little bit, but not much… and you are fucked. For no reason – and then you go out of your way to say that even though a Big Bad is “hunting” MC – for again vague as fuck reasons – two seconds into the game it’s a fucking succubus who’s bitching about MC in what is likely to be a PAST life. Jesus Christ you couldn’t try harder to make me lose interest, if you’re going to go this hard into trying to fuck up the ending every which way possible. He didn’t even get time to learn what Journal Girl knew, BEFORE you start all the paranormal bullshit. Come on. Tell me you want to break your own neck tripping over your shoelaces to get to the finish line before you’re even at the quarter done mark, why don’t you.