Wicked Ways

You’re trying too hard to create conflict that DOES NOT need to be there.

= MC DOES NOT know what Amanda has been doing while SHE’S been away; there doesn’t need to be a “girlfriend” who’s LITERALLY there to either be NTR bait or a cock block to start with. You have Harem in the fucking tags. NOT Dating Sim. There is ONE option… NOT creating situations that PISS THE GIRLS OFF or MAKE ME CHOOSE BETWEEN THEM!

= He has commitment issues: Bullshit. You use that as an excuse to make it viable that he chases two other women and the ONLY SCENE Amanda gives when she finally GETS introduced in more than pics is a freaking BLOW JOB – and then the ONLY thing she does is force MC to choose between her and Samantha. Right fucking off…

First, it’s called Build Up. What you’re setting up is not build up. It’s a PITFALL.
Second, if they were together for ANY length of time and their relationship was MORE THAN SEXUAL (You have the asshole talking about marriage and kids with her during the pool scene for fuck sakes – as a guy with “commitment” issues… and CUMMING INSIDE OF TWO WOMEN HE BARELY KNOWS! Without protection, or any assurances of them not ovulating) then Amanda should already know about what happened with his last Girl. She would KNOW to be reassuring that she wasn’t doing anything with anyone else (and the inference that HE would have is usually THROWN FIRST BY THE ONE THAT’S FUCKING CHEATING! * Regardless of the fact that again; if you actually FOLLOWED the structure of a harem they would have TALKED it out and she would make allowances for his desires if she actually wanted to bloody well keep him, so NO. On his count, it SHOULDN’T be considered “cheating.” It’s just badly written plot that MAKES IT CHEATING, when it really does not have to be)

The scene right after having to choose between Samantha and Amanda FORCES another Choice between them when it should be YOU CAN DO BOTH. It’s called IN STORY: Amanda’s shoot by time frame DOES NOT conflict with whatever the fuck you were going to be doing with Samantha. You’re done. Also, you DID tell Eva about Amanda. He mentioned her during the point after they’d fucked, and probably before (I used skip because a lot of this shit was him being a complete simp for MIDDLE AGED WOMEN or you being way too damn psuedo philosophical. Just, fuck off with blowing so much smoke up these girls asses. You GET to do that when there is NO WAY you’re making that the PLAYER can make a choice to fuck up… and even then it gets annoying. You’re being masturbatory about your own bloody renders; and the girls faces are NOT that attractive. You also have one body type, and if you ask me you went too many C’s on the “Thicc”) * I tapped out at this point because I DO NOT trust you to be able to maturely and properly resolve this so the player is NOT punished. At all.

Harem does not make you choose between girls. It’s a multiple choice question where the answer CAN be “I want them all,” and it is usually selective based on personal tastes. The way you’ve structured this bullshit is a DATING SIM. If you had a binary question asking do I want the game to be Harem at the very beginning – then you can do whatever the fuck you want with the story as long as it works out and while I’d be tense I’d stick it out to see if you actually lived up to the premise. Also – Harem’s NOT about commitment issues. You are literally willing to commit to EVERY woman you get involved with in a Harem game. I do not understand how so many people get this so damned wrong. It is NOT Polyamorous. The girls don’t get to fuck anyone else, and you consider them all your wives. From basically the start – or you see the potential that they could be someone you go that deep for. Otherwise they wouldn’t be added, so if anything it’s a collector’s issue. Or a possessiveness issue. Which might be basically the same thing.

Given the title it seems like either a poor attempt at tongue in cheek, or you’re own prejudice against people that like Harem content. Given what you’ve actually structured the game like. Because all I can see is one giant net, and you with your hand on the rug, waiting for the right moment to make him break the back of his skull by how hard you pull it out from under MC. That’s not really a good feeling. You could have a thousand times hotter girls, rendering and sexy moaning (I do not know why so many of you devs have a sound bar in options and then DON’T bother with actual SOUND during the sex scenes for fuck sake) and the fact that I can see a drama crux point coming a mile away means I won’t be. It’s not unsalvagable. It COULD be a good story, but your pacing is far from “natural” (I laughed my ass off that two people who’d barely met; barely flirted and decided to Smash That within basically two half dates could think anything about the awkward conversations they’d engaged in was bloody natural… and I happen to have Mid Spectrum Aspergers in real life. So that should freaking tell you something) Suffice it to say I couldn’t recommend this for a Harem game if someone was asking is it a good one. There’s a LOT of work you’d need to do in order to get me to bother finishing this current download. Nevermind any others you might come out with.