The Seven Realms

The renders are good. The girls are hot, and the potential for pregnancy is a plus – especially since vampires. However; the difference between “linked mates” and Bond Mates is too convoluted and you did it more to link others to each other than the MC. You’ve labeled it Harem = it’s Wife Sharing. Two of those who “join” your harem are already taken. Screw “open” minds, you got the genre wrong. Part of a harem is about the collection. The possession. They are your treasures. You protect them; you guard and you KEEP them. To yourself. Which is why the bland passive AF male protagonist that is every harem lead in anime for the most part, peeves people off so much. Also, you’re effectively ripping off twilight, but actual Fairies. Throw everything into a pot, and sometimes you don’t get minestrone. You just get unrecognizable sludge. It doesn’t gel that two souls can be divided into two bodies – and in a HAREM game, they both wouldn’t still see the ONE person destined as their Bond Mate, as the one person for them. I get the connection to build a harem, but you made the main girl open to sharing her mate. You didn’t need to do more than that. The story waffles between Vampire King is an asshole, and no… he’s really not. Pick an enemy you want the player to actually have to build a power base to face, and stick with that concept. Tasha did not need to be Zayir’s wife – since it doesn’t matter and they’ll both let you fuck her. Even to come inside her pussy. She’s effectively a part of the harem and can add lesbian trait to your main girl… but she could have done so on either point, to show an open mind WITHOUT being taken. Zayir and her could have even been friends with benefits – since she could blame MC for “being indecisive” Which would still indicate MC is who she wants. Since the one girl is bound to your main girl for reasons I won’t spoil, the Alpha Female wolf who is her bond mate = sort of, didn’t need to be. Because MC is. There was a way to introduce power to the wolves as second class citizens to the vampires, without that complication. Have her sign on to get experience in battle so she can be the “most powerful” alpha evar, by guarding the MC and his bond mate. Have her open in a slow burn to the eventual courtship where MC will be dominant and MC main girl shows the softer/familial side. That way you end up with the same result; organically, and you don’t muddle the genres your working on. I signed on for the Harem, but some aspects of the story need to be shored up and made clearer. If you intend to kill Zayir off in story, fine… It’s not a perfect fix for the fuck up because man, putting him with Tasha’s either a brick wall to progress with her eventually, or you just death flagged him so hard. Then again, Ophelia. Really? Atlas, I’m gonna go with subtle’s not your thing. At least you used the name in a clever reference, but the story should be a scalpel. That’s mystery. Bludgeoning your way through everything right from the start – being obvious, is more a sledgehammer. It doesn’t even work for TV as far as keeping the audience invested. It’s more likely to see many lost. Despite the obvious influences, I do see potential here. However, you’ve made some of the concepts contracry to the genre I think most people would choose. Since the option is there, and this is after all, a vampire game. Who’s not going to take the full power fantasy?

I thought I was going to hate this story, cuz… vampires… so yeah o.O however, I thought it was done pretty well. I like the clan dynamics, and the rebellious nature of the story. The women are good looking and the renders and animations are very well done. So, yeah… pleasantly surprised.