The Last Star Walker

Legitimate question Dev:

IF you were going to make the “beautiful” Twink Sissy “male” MC character = WHY? The fuck, do you ask the Player if they prefer to be DOMINANT?!? (He’s too much of a JRPG STING BEAN to actually be pretty to me; just ONCE I would like to play the brawny motherfucker that looks like he can take more than a single half hearted punch OR deliver one, that actually has IMPACT. Without being reduced to a MINION for HP)

= You just STRAIGHT UP ignored my stated preference AS DOMINANT when I told you so – by the stupid “Worship Breasts” Scene (without offering me even in brackets the acknowledgement that SHE WILL SUBMIT TO ME IN TIME…) So you obviously have your own bias/objective here.

That’s absolutely bad writing. You do not ASK me if I want to play as the DOMINANT and then give me no path to actually DO SO. You ask me if I want to play dominant, IF you’re actually willing to present the player with choices that allow MC to BE DOMINANT. It’s NOT hard mathz.

If that’s the best you have for the game and this early in you put him up against a walking GORILLA (Like that’s supposed to attract ANYONE!!! – I don’t care that she has muscles; you need to be aware of the differences in GENDER that would make her more SHREDDED. MORE DEFINED > NOT BULKED like a fucking ape on steriods!) * You CAN do “muscle girl” right, AND still have her be attractive to the damned general audience.

But so far your story’s half cocked because you’d rather fuck our heads around with a “mystery” that as yet I can’t give two fucks about because you already IGNORED my stated PREFERENCES. You already have TWO factions at odds – and what SHOULD BE THE FIRST CHOICE OF A FACTION TO FOLLOW becomes “No, I don’t have a choice…”

Then fuck off with asking ME in the Overview which fucking faction I’m gonna go with >.< If you’re going to do that; either OPEN ALL OPTIONS FROM THE START, or open ALL options at some given CRUX point (and TELL THE PLAYER that will be happening – so that they understand you’re NOT just trying to railroad them!) And I’m not even likely past much of the INTRO…

There is NO CHOICE here. You have your narrative, you have your objective whatever the fuck it is… and we’re GOING to go along with it. So what’s the incentive to play? Choice. Is. Power. It belongs to THE PLAYER. Not the Dev. Your job is to code the game and make available the choices as we might have them. Not to make the fucking choices for us.

First, Multiple protagonists means you couldn’t even be bothered to decide WHO the “driving force” of the story should actually be. [Here’s a tip – if it’s a HAREM and it’s Male Lead; it’s the MALE protagonist. Period!]

There was no reason to add Futa/Trans (the chances of it being legitimate as a physical obstacle – and it IS a social obstacle – are in the 0.0X as a number decimal points by percentage. If you’re a legitimate hermaphrodite; you are the two headed snake. If you’re not, there’s a switch in your brain that BROKE and makes you THINK you want to be something you’re not, and were never meant to be) * This is STILL NOT a common thing, and it should never be. Nor should it be “normalized.”

If you’re going to insist on giving the Main Character (IE the bloody MALE) Superpowers > Sissification makes absolutely no sense. Nor does Lactation WITHOUT Pregnancy content. (It can happen = the REASON it happens is STILL tied to the girl’s body reacting as it would if it was PREGNANT) There’s NEVER a good reason to include the tag of Sissification in general. Would you like it, if you’re female as a Dev if someone took your demons > broke you further down with them and MADE you believe you want to be a male (just because they know you’re terribly envious of what you THINK is “power” – it’s not as fun to be male as all you fuckwits seem to think) and then after you’d gone through THAT “transformation” ripped it away to break you absolutely into being an entirely submissive little bitch of a fuck doll, who ONLY cares about sex? But you assholes never think about that. You just think all guys that play these games – and I know it’s MOSTLY guys – are twisted, broken sad sack limp dicked simps you can exploit for endless cash.

To the question of who you should side with: Harem. Fuck multiple endings; and fuck making the path to BUILDING the harem any sort of over complicated. If you put Harem in the tags, more people that play this than don’t WILL pursue that course. Because it’s the only one wherein the Player gets ACTUAL power. There’s a reason that New Vegas is as popular as it is, even as broken as it launched. Freedom of CHOICE. Personally Mine was ALWAYS Yes Man. I don’t give a fuck if people think it’s not the best for the Mojave = if I am the one doing all the bitch work; Why in the FUCK would I give power to anyone else when MY ass was the one who got shot in the head over bullshit politics to start with. Then constantly gets treated like FO’s most powerful ERRAND boy (as literally The Courier…) by all and sundry. Come on.

And on that topic: Virgin – DO NOT do ANYTHING to this girl(s) with Sex Toys that are NOT strictly VIBRATORS THAT CAN’T GO INSIDE! I have no fucking clue how so many of you dense dipshits misunderstand exactly what VIRGIN means, so I will spell it out for you: If she has NOT had sex with a human male, but HAS put something INSIDE of her pussy to the point it went PAST her fucking Hymen > She HAS. HAD. SEX. It just wasn’t with a human. It’s not even that hard to look up. If you’re curious, just look up the word Sex. Fuck me. She IS NOT a Virgin because SHE thinks she “hasn’t had sex” – She IS a VIRGIN when she genuinely HAS NOT HAD SEX. So you can make her play with herself; you CAN absolutely make her explore her sexuality > if you’re going to insist that she’s any sort of pure or overly romantic to cock block the hopeful PLAYER = You DO NOT get to take away the actual value implicit in that tag. She WILL ALWAYS HAVE BEEN MADE AWARE OF EXACTLY HOW VALUABLE THAT GIFT IS. That’s half the reason their egos and expectations in a relationship are massively unrealistic these days. How in the fuck is this a hard concept for any of you?!? [And yes, Genius’ Scenes that involve BLOOD at her first piercing DO MATTER and SHOULD BE INCLUDED. At least ask. That way the Player gets a VISUAL representation that she wasn’t lying, or stretching the truth and genuinely WAS what she claimed to be to start with] Again My Dorm completely borked this with the ONE character in their game thus far that applied to the tag itself. I expect if KIM is a Virgin as well (she has a PHYSICAL reason to STILL BE ONE despite how attractively she’s otherwise rendered – when you apply realistically the mental/emotional scarring that the dev has been using to COCK BLOCK with her character, and as such implies they’re aware of that point) then the Dev has only shown they are all the more likely to cock that all up in the same fashion JUST because Sex Toys, Durh! Too many games fuck around with the audience like this, and the ONLY thing it tells us is you are all massive DICKS.

TL;DR version – because you have literally any (and in this case ALL) of these tags, I don’t trust you won’t try to mind fuck your audience or make too many endings too convoluted to want to waste my time on the download. Given there’s exactly ONE of them that’s worth a damn to me. I can see too many ways you’ll TRY to fuck the player over into getting a different ending than they want, in the name of “female empowerment.” Entirely negating the obvious point that Superpowers imply Empowerment PERIOD; and a HAREM is predominantly a MALE Driven POWER FANTASY. The concept could be compelling. The story might be immersive to a point… but you have too many unncessary red flag tags.