The Adored Marriage

Since my last attempt for whatever reason didn’t go through…

= First problem: You include a Harem Tag in an NTR game. (You clearly would rather it BE an NTR game)

= Next: You don’t actually CLEARLY differentiate the paths, or ASK FROM THE START whether we WANT the Harem Path (In which case NONE of the girls GET TO FUCK ANYONE BUT MC!)

= Next: You introduce Jennifer to make it so the MC can “CHEAT” (So that you can justify the bullshit NTR tag that doesn’t need to be there in the first place… and “female empowerment” scenes where if you’re not fucking your wife she’ll probably do what YOU want anyway, and go seek extramarital “help” probably from her boss. We’ll get to that part)

= Next: You INTRODUCE Diana by showing her fucking her “husband.” (unnecessary; both the attachment, and the sex = if she is a LOVE interest; this is not a good introduction) You also needlessly introduce Jennifer/Jessica? who already had a boyfriend, Dumped or GOT DUMPED BY, said boyfriend… ANNND she’s retardedly back with him the next day. Why?!? (Ulterior motive: You WANT this to be an NTR only game!)

= Next: You force a vacation as a “double date” wherein it SEEMS like you might get somewhere with Diana. Problem = She’s MARRIED. She is not the type and even if she was, she CANNOT avoid fucking her husband… So you force a scene where the PLAYER thinks that the only real way to gain her investment is to MAKE US watch her fuck her husband, and have MC stick around to come for watching it. This. Is. NOT. Harem! (Harem would be her finding an excuse NOT to fuck her husband, while allowing the MC liberties, that encourage Player to think there is a path with her going forward, IE the NTR can apply both ways, since Netori IS the one form of what you WANT to portray in this game that IS acceptable in a Harem context) * If she is having sex with her husband while attached, fine. Making it seem like we have to watch the scene in order to maintain her involvement OR properly open a path > not fine. Involving allowing her to start Les bullshit just to make it seem like Diana is happier (while her husband is watching = I would’ve had LESS problem, not NO, if you had worked the scene so Black Guy WASN’T IN THE SCENE TO WATCH. Make him think to go grab a beer and then it becomes about whether MC wants to allow potential Lesbian Sharing and can state that ONLY: IF I AM INVOLVED!) Literally NONE of this set up is Harem Possible. But it COULD be, if handled the right way, is what’s so galling.

= Next, you give MC’s wife no real choice in the office to tell her boss however politely, to piss off and keep it PROFESSIONAL; AND FORCE the notion that even if things are SHAKY in her marriage to the point they’re “exploring” (read they are heading for divorce to start with – and neither of them wants to admit it yet) she’ll just randomly let her “best friend” fuck around with her by booking a vacation – when she’s MARRIED to the guy that has all the power over whether her “friend” stays EMPLOYED. Why do I need to explain to you chuckleheads what exactly is wrong with every inch of all of this? There is NO ONE that would let a friend pull this bullshit while she’s aware that said female is in a relationship with someone that controls how easy it is for the girl to SURVIVE, and still call them a “friend.” Nevermind a good or best friend.

= Next: You introduce a character who CLEARLY views MC’s wife as “The One That Got Away” (nevermind that she “got away” for a fucking REASON!) and he is ALSO attached. Riley isn’t “self interested” = She knows she’s the bloody BACK UP. (Again, if there was more than one instance where we could influence MC’s wife to tell high school boy to piss right off and keep to his lane – fine. THEN it could be Harem; especially if Riley would show any form of interest in the MC, rather than you playing timid with it because you’d obviously much rather MC’s Wife IS THE ONE CONTROLLING THE FUCKING NARRATIVE)

For any and ALL of these reasons, this is NOT (yet – and it could be reworked to shape up to be better, that I will acknowledge) a Harem Game. It belongs all but solely in NTR as it stands.