Scions of the Divine
About Scions of the Divine
Many years ago, the world was graced with the presence of gods and goddesses that made living a mortal life easy and fun. However, that’s not the case anymore, as a series of events has left the world without a divine presence for hundreds of years. With very few people being able to use magic, mortals turned to industrialization and technology to simulate the functions of the deities the best that they can.
Follow the story of a young man who’s getting sick of how bland it can be inside of this modern industrial world ruled by a tyrant king when he suddenly receives divine power. With this change comes tough decisions, passionate romance, heartbreak, and so much more! Decide how these powers should be used and slowly change the world, for better or worse, but be wary; there are other Scions receiving divine power, each with their own ambitions!
Downloads
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Minimum
OS: Windows 7+ / macOS 10.10+ / Linux
CPU: Dual Core 1.5 GHz
RAM: 2 GB
GPU: Integrated Graphics
Storage: 1.07 GB
Recommended
OS: Windows 10+ / macOS 12+ / Linux
CPU: Dual Core 2.0 GHz
RAM: 4 GB
GPU: Any dedicated GPU
Storage: 1.07 GB
New Problem – which shows you know FUCK AND ALL about actual combat:
Rayne. She’s 5’2″ tall. And that 130 lbs you say she is > most of it’s in her TITS.
She would absolutely get her ass handed to her in actual combat. He’s not smaller than she is. He has five fucking inches on her. He would also not likely weigh only 134 lbs at 5’7″ tall. I am 5’4″ and I am not fat but I weigh 144 lbs for fuck sake. He should at least be about 160 to be correct and LEAN but as built as you claim he’s getting to be. Muscle weighs more than fat.
Aside from that she also somehow has 2 SLOTS for “memory” which I’m going to take for sex scenes; and she’s NOT on the “romanceable” list. Why? If you’re going to be the kind of literal combat retard that thinks the MC should just LET a girl that tiny kick his fucking ass for no good practical reason just because you want HER to seem like the bad ass and you assume the audience will be more focused on her TITS, then the LEAST you can do is make her listed CORRECTLY. Because if she’s got slots for Memory, it means there’s GOING to be a fucking relationship and she SHOULD be goddamned Romanceable.
That’s TWICE. You won’t get three fuck ups with me.
First problem – OTHER than the fact that though there is an affection bar there are no choices thus far in my playthrough that will let me choose positive or negative with ANY girl… (If you want to tell me a story fine… but if you’re going to never offer a choice about anything you don’t get to write the sentence “Decide how these powers are going to be used…” For fuck sakes. And there’d be NO point to an affection bar to start with. Because there’s no way to gain or necessarily LOSE affection, if you don’t present those fucking options)
Next:
You create a world building point wherein GODS exist; Scions can use divine power as CHANNELS for an excess divine power once a deity does DIE > AND CAN BECOME GODS THEMSELVES!!! And then you fuck it all up by randomly yeeting them from existence. For, reasons…
Then you create a MC (who objectively SHOULD and NEEDS to be THE. MOST. POWERFUL. FUCKING GOD!!! IN. THE. DAMNED. GAME = BY THE MID POINT OF THE BLOODY GAME IF YOU HAVE HALF A GODDAMNED BRAIN CELL FUNCTIONING >.<) Who even though he LOVED the stories as a kid; and later events prove his (Dead?!?) Father OBJECTIVELY Correct, tries to play DOUBTING THOMAS. For again, Reasons…
>> You did not clearly define what a scion can do; how rare they are, if they share any base traits, if they get different abilities that affect a fucking hierarchy. Nada. So of course dipshit doesn’t believe he’s got Divine power.
You have the “sentinel” idiot (who was written to BE an idiot – a DOCTOR is NOT going to lie about her patients medical history when it’s relevant to a fucking CRIME you asshole > they will lose their lisence for that > it would NOT be safe for MC and frankly you built a world where MAGIC is a KNOWN GODDAMNED QUANTITY… YOU. DO NOT. GET. TO. PRETEND. ANYTHING. IS NOT. POSSIBLE! She is unequivocally YOU treating your audience like you think we’re retarded. You need to re-write that. If she’s there to INVESTIGATE > SHE’S. THERE. TO. INVESTIGATE! Not to play Inquisitioner. Jesus fucking Christ; what you think just because she’s got tits and is on YOUR list we’re supposed to just auto be DTF? Gah. (Also – he’s not Wolverine or a member of the X-Men. Tell me you’re not going to name the head of the Sentinels Boliver. But I shouldn’t give you chuckleheads any bright ideas)
= He was in a coma for TWO FUCKING MONTHS. 3 days, fine. Two weeks would be pushing it as far as keeping his job – and people would absolutely have to go to bat for him; but he’d also have the grounds to sue as there’s usually workman’s comp issues exactly for this sort of thing. You didn’t mention severance… but on that subject >> how in the fuck is this asshole supposed to pay his rent? Did you dunces think about that? Who paid his fucking hospital bill? How’s he gonna afford food. Clothing. Transportation. To even remotely maybe get another job. THAT is why you DON’T get to make this fuckwit a Doubting Thomas. Because you wrote his dumbass into a massively unnecessary CORNER – It’s DIVINE magic; it could literally he was out for an hour and it doesn’t matter a whit to the player. Suspension of disbelief. It can be a wonderful tool. Just… fuck me.
>> Also Astrara better not stay more powerful than MC; not with that attitude – and I GET TO BE THE ONE TO TOSS HER DUMBFUCK ASS OFF A ROOFTOP! > Before I decide if we f fuck or not. We’ll see how she likes damned near dying (There’s NO reason for her to be that level of PRICK to the MC if she’s supposed to be a love interest = no one sane, or who actually CARED at all about being a love interest would behave this way. It doesn’t make her a “badass.” It makes you retarded as a writer)