Once Upon a Time – In a Isekai World

I thought I recognized your work – but you SHOULDN’T make characters in this game that are related to Mou-sama. It WILL get confusing. The ones in that game were fractured enough and all over the fucking place.

You ALREADY can’t decide if you want this MC to be “The King;” The Emporer, A Hero or – maybe? A god… [You really need to clarify that I am DEFINITELY marrying either A GODDESS or BECOMING THE EMPORER. Straight up – The HIGH elf LEAVING the bloody castle if I don’t pick her as the first wife is a NO NO. The cat girl saying I ONLY get more cat girl wives (IN A FUCKING HAREM!!!) IF I pick HER as the first wife… No. All of this is just no. It’s the SAME SHIT you pulled in Mou-Sama and that was enough to make me tap out well before the end.

= Giving 50 gold to the adventurers to search for the kidnapped women SHOULD mean I get BOTH the wife & the daughter. (Also – cool it with the “lollis” or you’re more likely to get cancelled than not guys. I can accept the premise and I have no problem with The Itty Bitty Titty Committee – per say, I do tend to like at least C Cups – but if they start looking like they’re younger than BLEEDING age… you’re going to run into problems at some point no matter how many disclaimers you throw up. The “grey area” in ‘fantasy’ as far as the actual law in real life is concerned IS NOT that grey. There are stipulations about glorification, for example. You’re clearly promoting an agenda more than arguing inclusivity. This is less me doing a “won’t someone think of the children” schtick than an I don’t want to see anyone get in real trouble for something they didn’t intend. I’d go one or two where it’s ‘questionable’ (but also believable they’re around 14-16 since you set it in the medieval era and are involving royals) There’s a reason for the bullshit are you over 18 crap they HAD to put in legally after what Tracy Lords pulled. : / [Not that it stops a kid from pressing the damned button regardless…]

= And why the fairies? You do realize he’s got a horse cock. There’s something to be said for Big Vs Small > But the pussy isn’t a rubber band, and like one, you CAN tear the walls. There are things that legitimately will not fit and would be dangerous to lethal to actually try to. (Hemorrhaging kills a lot more expectant mothers in labor than anyone wants to know…) ** You actually had a lamia, and you turned her into a fairy for NO GOOD REASON if the king was actually infertile. Tell me you’ve never played Mortal Kombat. Reptile goes Invisible. Make it so only MC can see and feel her. Problem solved.
== One problem. Having her try to get MC onto the Shadow side is again way more fucking convoluted than it needs to be. Pick. A Fucking. Narrative; and STICK WITH IT. She’s evil or she’s not. In which case IF she’s evil – she EATS the king while he’s fucking her in a scene we DON’T see… and one problem down. If she’s not, well like I said that gets massively more convoluted than it ever needed to be.

Mousama had potential; and you convoluted things so badly that by the time I got near enough the ending to make the choice – I didn’t know what the hell I was gonna get. (I also had the game marked “Finished” when there was only one actual choice, so grain of salt) DECIDE. CLEARLY: What do you actually WANT this MC to be? King. Emporer, or God. [Given the elven bullshit that’s probably the only way he will live to raise half his kids… unless you’re gonna cop out at some point and make Elena one of his wives, and reveal when he chooses that path that she made him “immortal” in the hopes that he would do as she wanted. But that would also be similar to your first works]

= There was no point in making the Grandmother as hot as the queen; and then using your bullshit fire mage to cock block the sex scene. Blue ball me with that character again and I’d be DONE with her. That is you being way too obvious about it. She’s already married > she SHOULD be PAST BREEDING AGE… She doesn’t have the kind of draw to make up for in temptation, putting up with that bullshit (And if you really want to infer it was the KING shooting blanks then you better back that up with the Queen Pregnant by MC)