Northern Lights: The Beginning

Now I have played it through to the end of the current content.

Frankly the panting could do better in the sex scenes (But plus side there is actual voiced sound for once) – and detective girl gets no scenes with MC as yet > nor does Amber (but somehow the “antagonist’s wife does? – do note: not complaining about that. At all) ** You could have taken out a couple of Hana and Irene’s scenes, or the second with Mia and given one each to Detective Frank Castle, and Captain I’m the MC >> with TITS. It’s still a pretty generous start with a decent amount of content. So I’ll laud you guys for that.

> I will point out that Amber’s role in the story is INCREDIBLY redundant UNLESS you’re insinuating there’s something within HQ – an actual intelligence agency wouldn’t send TWO teams on a mission without informing the other so that they DON’T fuck up each other’s seperate missions. “Kane” was you being a dick with Mia. Straight up. The MC should be marked as an ACE or some sort of actual profile so most people know what the fuck his role is. (I do appreciate you made him big but not horse cock big)
[I mean to say Amber herself makes the point TOO OBVIOUS that there IS corruption in HQ – Either legitimately or they are actively tripping over themselves to catch X thing, because the left hand doesn’t know what the right is doing… and that won’t end well]

The sex scenes should also allow for player choice about internal endings – Mia and CEO’s wife we don’t actually see (we can assume both however) and Hanna it’s always outside; for no good reason. Irene says I’m safe (if she’s the “BOLD” one she shouldn’t give a fuck about safety… the risk would be the turn on to a girl like her > and it would be a better assurance that she can angle to be kept, so it’s a WIN for her)

> You COULD actually just show which choices have NTR directly – instead of making players constantly check the damned profile to see what changed. I do appreciate that you DID in fact make it entirely avoidable, but the way you’ve implemented things is still more of a pain in the ass than it needs to be. (That’s NOT an invitation to cock block pregnancy content with Anal scenes >.< )

>> AI wouldn’t be anywhere near sophisticated enough to trust with the level of tech that you’re implying for the big crux of the story. They don’t even use AI for drones – for good reason. Find another reason for the damned thing to be dangerous. AI is NEVER going to be good enough to completely control high level tech > and you shouldn’t ever fucking WANT it to be.

It’s not a bad story, it’s got potential and at least the girls can be absolutely thus far kept Loyal. (I’d argue the corruption mechanic is unnecessary and NTR OFF should really just be asked ONCE at the start of the game and then stuck to if the player answers Yes. That would make things easier as well) * It’s more that “corruption” is ONLY necessary as a stat at all BECAUSE you guys went out of your way to include potential NTR content in a harem tagged setting. Which was always unncessary, and can be polarizing.

For those that don’t like NTR and do want Harem – the game is safe to play.

For those that DO like NTR (Personally, get your head examined) the game is safe to play. It’s not a perfect implementation; but there’s potential down either path. You CAN actively make the game – relatively – how you want it. So there’s that.

Actually just checked – there is NOW a point that says the NTR is avoidable for Hottest Summer > on other sites where I had looked it up, it was far less clear, and this was pointed out in comments.

> Point stands: NTR does NOT belong in a true harem setting, that’s you as Devs being needlessly dickish and farming for drama (or indulging in your own passive aggressive fetishes… your call which one is true)