Mutant College

Okay Dev,
Let me see if I can lay out all of the mechanical problems you should probably fix at some point, more calmly. They also involve the plot…
> First and foremost; as mentioned last comment – the MC should NOT start weak. That’s the main problem.
> From a mechanical standpoint, it takes WAY too long to do anything in game (this is a SEX game = guess what the DRAW is?) This problem is MULTI faceted:
1) You should let the player choose a specific TRAIT in power from the start. Physical, Mental and Empathic. Then you ONLY need to train ONE thing to get the evolutions (36 – when getting the 9/4/9 stats that actually LET you “evolve” [And DON’T show any marked difference in power set, or physique by the way…] takes about 5 days in general???) If you learn the bloody time frames. It does NOT need to take that bloody long.
2) You need cash to date the women; which can affect certain events. (for some reason before I even chose to try to DATE Angelica – I could take her to Rebecca and go on a quest; where she SHOULDN’T freaking trust me yet anywhere near enough to take my word I know some mad scientist who can help) it takes again – TOO. FUCKING. LONG!
3) You don’t explain what the skill tree actually does in the tutorial. At all. I have gone through it more than once. There are dots that say “1 Charge” and dots that say “1 Slot” and the player won’t know what the fuck is the difference… but they cost way too much anyway. Given the amount of day grinding you’d have to go through to get that far. 1 rank plus 1 rank = next fucking rank dude. It’s that simple. You do less math; and people don’t break their keyboards faceplanting into it because they get so fucking bored. With the fact that there are currently ONLY two extra “1 Slots” in the game – why are there so many (useless) bloody powers? Are you planning to expand this so that he actually is Rogue at an Omega Mutant level?!? Because if so, awesome… but a) your story needs a HELL of a lot of work, and b) so do your requirements. They’re absolute bullshit unless you want the player to eventually need to spend a decade to actually unlock the end of ONE girl’s freaking arc.
4) Kira – has MULTIPLE POWERS. Why? Her father is a guy that can “intimidate” people and her mother is literally The Girl With ALL The Powers. >.< Because you wanted to do a DUMB-ASSED inciting scene about Kira getting abused. to excuse her being the MASSIVE ASSHOLE. Which it DOES NOT! It’s just you getting your rocks off on torture porn. (Kira also DOESN’T need a boyfriend – and frankly, she should DUMP Rex the moment MC fucks/cums INSIDE of her… * It might be nice for that option to GO SOMEWHERE; AT SOME POINT)
5) You have way too many jobs. Pick ONE. Make promotions so you eventually earn better money – or reduce date costs. It’s not like it exists for any other reason right now.
6) Patrols are all but useless without certain random events. You state the villain list are the big boys we’re gonna need multiple powers to handle (without telling us – I would assume, and I have to because you DON’T say so – that 1 Slot means we can permanently equip a new power) *** FUCKING. KIRA!!! OR REX… AUTOMATIC. You DO NOT need other random assholes who DO NOT MATTER. Rex’s power could be evolved to MAKE him Collosus. When it belongs to the MC. And we will get to his bloody Mother. Kira is basically Kara instead of her Mom being Powergirl. So STEAL HERS when she’s in the middle of beating the shit out of her kid; and if you do go through the trouble to grind your ass off to get that extra slot point done beforehand = MAKE. IT. PERMANENT! Kira’s mom gets drained of her powers, Kira can get revenge > MC is a CREDIBLE threat with no real waiting, and Kira has a better reason to stick with MC that ISN’T just about Power.
7) Do you know why FemDom on a telepath (as a secret Switch…) DOES NOT WORK? Can you take a bloody guess mate. Really, I want to know. Here’s a hint in case you can’t: She. can. Read. Fucking. Minds!!! She KNOWS the people who CAN break her > Ergo she would automatically stay well the fuck away from them, in order to either hide her secret or preserve her illusion of “dominance.” Dumbass. You could literally give her Starfox’s powerset and it would be a LOT better to manage. She uses it on MC; with the player choosing or not, to be Dom – he fucks her absolutely senseless and shatters her endurance because no other guy has lasted against her like MC can… she becomes his willing entirely submissive little BITCH (apparently very literally >.<) As a telepath, she’s professor Xavier. Who frankly is only NOT everyone’s worst bloody nightmare because of his code of HONOR. If he ever used his actual powers outside of necessity; we are ALL fucked. Absolutely. Which doesn’t work with a character that has legitimate authority and can genuinely RUIN the rest of MC’s fucking LIFE!
8) Mantis – Jessie. First, didn’t need to die. Could’ve been knocked out, de-energized. Could’ve turned to OUR side and helped us take down captain “He” man. There’s a problem with that narrative as well – Someone MORE POWERFUL than her was in control of her… and she was murdering other students to FEED him. (I’m guessing some sort of bio-feedback, or other leech type power that lets him take what she gives him) That is the ONLY reason continuing this murder plot isn’t entirely BULLSHIT. Even then, it’s STILL bullshit. You have too many antagonists; you DON’T need one that’s going to be a random “You Died” screen. There’s the damned DEAN and Kira’s family (owning her sexually IF that does actually happen DOES NOT negate either her Mother or Father from being a major problem for MC – WHICH IS WHY YOU NEVER MAKE ANYONE MORE POWERFUL THAN THE MC, THAT THE MC CANNOT GET AWAY FROM!!!)
9) After I wasted all that time to help Ella, the second AFTER the first sex scene when I came inside of her (which at least you let me choose – so keep that up, it’s good) she decides to go Bipolar on MC because he actually did what he said he was gonna do… Do you want this bitch to be single forever and epically screwed by the Ghosts, or not?!? Because if that was me – and it should be allowed for the MC – I would just say okay then. You’re on your own Love, next time you say you want my help you better be bloody sure about it. Or don’t ask. I would be DONE. [In real life – I have lost near to my ENTIRE important structural family mate; running away from what she doesn’t want to face is massively immature, because it won’t change a damned thing – and in her case actively DANGEROUS to her mental health. In a way it wouldn’t be to most people. This is aside the fact she can’t “raise” the dead; or do ghost bolts, or anything COOL that would make her legitimately powerful. But she should be able to. “Seeing Ghosts” is you literally saying, this girl is straight up Bipolar and or Schitzophrenic. Whoopie. Since when was that a fucking MUTANT POWER?!?]
10) Frankly if the Dean is going to start off that outright antagonistic for bullshit power games; Kira’s family FUNDS the fucking school, Not to mention her Mom is basically Clark Kent with tits… and both of them are set AGAINST the MC from the goddamned start – why the fuck did you design this damned game? There’s no point in trying to go to a college that opressive from the off. Jesus. Farm boy doesn’t mean that level of functionally retarded. >.< [It would be intriguing if by fully romancing/owning Kira – she encourages us to “break” her Mom; so we do get both of them in the Harem… besides, if you can cuck Rex, who says it needs to stop there?] IE: Superman with tits is a much more fun concept when she’s on MC’s side, and no one says Kira has to remain an only child…
** If you give the option for the player to pick the trait they want for a type of power to build off of, it’s a little more work for a lot more choice. Which will lead to replayability. It would cut down on how much grinding you have to do as a player to get to what we’re all here for. Your game would be much better off. But if EVERY girl is anything like Kira, Lisa or Ella > That’s going to be a no bueno for me. Mia doesn’t need to be a confrontational Klepto. Angelica ends up starting to be real nice to MC as mentioned abov; BEFORE it should be possible. There’s a random “thief” girl I don’t even know why you put in the damned game but for one scene that doesn’t go anywhere really. AND most of the powers are functionally all but USELESS. There’s also the fact the music DOES NOT need to interfere with the lewd sounds from the damned girls. At all. I fucking hate music in games anyway, and frankly, it makes it harder to hear the girls. The moans should also be ALL throughout the actual sex scene. Not just in little bits you may miss.
Fix any of this, or all of it with hope – and I may give your game another genuine shot.
Right now, it’s partly borked by unnecessary social politics in storyline, and a good bit you can do to nudge the grinding down. The girls DO NOT need to be a showcase of different levels of every variation of mental health issues… and I would straight up remove the freaking psychiatrist and make the doc ANY other sort of professional. Just, Jesus. Okay, it wasn’t exactly entirely “calm.” It also could’ve been worse.