Last Wish

2+2 x 2 = 8:

2+2 = 4 > 4 x 2 = 8

Not 6.

If you’re going to write that the MC got every question correct and should be any sort of tutor, you might want to make sure YOU can write basic math. I suck at math in general so the only answer I can come up with is you meant to hit 8 and pressed the wrong button.
OR it’s really not you’re strong suit.

Neither are perk trees by the way (The game literally will not let me back out of the perk screen for trying to see what the ONE perk that exists in game at the moment actually does… and it’s NOT much of a “perk” if ANY of the women can resist it’s effect. Fuck off with that)

While we’re on the subject; screw the idea that he will be slain for “dark” magic.
It’s a society of magic users; no one fucking controls what element they get. So find ANOTHER VIABLE way to create a sense of tension. Also, killing the MC or even doing the whole “Wait, did I die?” bit is BS. Especially since you stuck his ass with healing magic just to create a false point of him not being “good enough” to get into your academy (when you literally write the fucking rules, dumbass)

HAREM. Harem Leaders CANNOT be weaker than the Main Girls. They SHOULD not be weaker than the main girls. Otherwise WHY. THE. FUCK. WOULD. THEY. WANT. TO. SCREW. HIM??? Jesus I know you dickheads all watch too much anime, but there’s a reason the genre is mostly shit – or way too much wish fulfillment. Wanting not to hurt ANY girl/Keep them all does NOT make him: A pervert. A Creep, or A PUNCHING BAG! Making the main academy girl be better than him at anything was frankly stupid. She can compete. She can specialize in an area that he doesn’t, but being BETTER? No. Not automatically. All you are doing is insulting your audience when you pull that shit. It stopped being funny years ago. Now it’s just bloody annoying.

The last time I played I believe you involved a fairly insane priestess for Domme content. Which is a NO for me. There was also again the fact that you seem to have buggered the one sex scene that I had access to with the wolf girl [Though I admit I found it jarring that she just randomly decided she was in heat and wanted to be bred by you because MC “saved her life” – Which really… no. He didn’t. He “Died” trying. There’s a BIG fucking difference] If you’re going to make the audience grind every thing in the game; you also have to bother making it worth the while. Just with the menu being borked, this game is a pass for me. If I can’t even back out from a perk menu without having to exit the damned game entirely; buddy… you have some serious work to do.

I highly doubt there’s going to be much opportunity to choose where stats go. So frankly the RPG part that could/should theoretically be there is basically out. It would be nice if I was wrong, but again I do hold that perk point above very much against you. At this point I don’t think it’s going to be more than deus ex BULLSHIT. The magic is more of a safety net, that you think you can do whatever you want with. When you write MC into a corner. That’s not the way good writing works, but it’s an easy out. So if that’s all this game’s gonna be, I’d tap out fairly quick. NONE of the females thus far have been anything remotely endearing. I doubt that’s going to change no matter how far up the affection rank I go.