Instinct Unleashed

You know, I always find it kinda crazy that your comments are allowed to be posted considering the amount of insane shit you say, how much you curse at and insult the developers of these games.

Was I disappaointed by the rushed chapter 14 and the ending I got? Sure, but do I need to go on a massive insane rant about it? No.

Just because a website tags a game like this one as a harem game, does not always mean that it is. Websites like this host thousands of games, the people adding and removing tags probably don’t have the time to check if every game has the proper tags on them.

And honestly, what were you expecting with this game? To me there was nothing about it that was going to be all sunshine and rainbows with a happy MC-focused harem ending. The only truly happy characters at the end were the less meaningful side characters that don’t really have any impact on the story as a whole. The first ending I got was “Prisoner 2907” and it is disappointing to me that it went that way but it does make sense to me, and how everyone reacted to that ending and most of them left the area also made sense. If this was a true harem game, with that ending, how do you expect the harem to stay together? Waiting who knows how long before they get to see their leader/lover again, if they ever do at all.

Now on the other hand, I will grant you that I did try to do another playthrough with different choices than my first playthrough, just to see if there are any different endings and how that plays out. But I ran into an error that prevents me from getting to the final confrontation and thus I can’t see any endings in that playthrough for whatever reason. However, I will say that based on what I experienced in that 2nd playthrough up to that point, it doesn’t matter what choices you make except for one or two side characters, considering that Andy does still become Angie whether you choose to get involved in that or not, which makes no sense to me at all because from what I could tell at first metting Andy there was no indication of him wanting that, it doesn’t become a thing for him until you choose to help feminize Sam and then later choose to feminize Andy as well. And yet, there it is, at the birthday scene Andy is Angie is once more. Then because I didn’t choose to have anything sexual with any of them in this 2nd playthrough I just get a black screen with the MC coming back down the stairs and leaving as if to say that the sex scene did still play out but happened off-screen. But again, no matter how much this annoys and disappoints me, I don’t feel the need for petty namecalling and insults, you need to calm down, or better yet considering you said you could write a better harem story than this, then why don’t you? Whether it’s in the form of some game or just a text document, I will give it a fair shot.

I’ll add one last thing.

Stella should just have been the “dream” GIRL. She didn’t need to be a submissive Futa. You can’t get her pregnant now because she doesn’t have the equipment; so IF you want to resolve this the right way = She is MC’s to keep. No debates; and she turns into a FULL GIRL. That way the experiment does work when you DON’T resist it… it’s been refined so it’s NOT deadly, and everyone wins. You’re finished. The actual most attractive female design in the game IS definitively female (and you still get the kinky bullshit that is there for literally no reason but actual Fetish content)

= Ethan’s Mom NEEDS to be available on BOTH paths. For whatever reason when I pursued one path, I didn’t actually get to meet her at the Gym to start anything with her. [Falls into you are denying a female that IS actually female, that SHOULD be in the fucking harem!] If it’s a more slow process when you do fuck Madison, fine. I won’t care. But it should be available to either choosing to take Madison up on her offer and TEMPORARILY borking things with Ash, or going with Ashley (which should only TEMPORARILY put Madison off of pursuing the MC = and SHE SHOULD look for a way that will not set MC as her direct enemy)

= There’s no point for several of the characters to be listed in game if you’re either going to do nothing with them, or set them as cock blocks to the MC. Ethan’s Mom. Madison. I would argue the futa bullshit all but borks Stella; and can still be resolved as above. The woman Stella’s attached to who’s name I’m not even going to try to pronounce (NEED to make her SUB to MC. There is no other acceptable recourse) Gabby. At this point on the one path, Ashley and her friend. You DO really need to fix that. Otherwise none of these characters in fact belong in a game that is called a Harem. There was also no reason to add a male best friend for MC that was married – just so you can steal his girl or get involved in a 3 WAY [Which is STILL NTR for the MC: because Lena doesn’t stop fucking Nathan… >.< ] * When she actually gets pregnant by MC – Nate should decide fuck it. He’s done, or Lena should decide she actually wants to be completely owned by/loyal to her baby’s “father.” {Have it be that they tried and Nate’s shooting blanks, and they knew that, but neither realized how they’d react to attempting to find a surrogate and thought they could handle it… only to have it end up that she’s possessive toward MC, and Nate is possessive to Lena, but both realize this path DENTED their relationship irrevocably. More realistic, still pays tribute to the fact they were invested in a relationship and tried to make it work, without devaluing the MC or the desires of the Player}

OR you should’ve created a list of characters that specifically ARE going to be in the harem; so that there is a definitive reason to pursue them as interesting. The others could’ve been marked Side Characters and as you have already, left mostly out of content. I’m willing to wait to see how you’ll resolve this. I do not think the story is nearly done. It won’t be until ALL of these character issues are addressed. Other than that, it’ll be just another game with a rushed ending; that had a lot more potential that didn’t get realized.