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ANNND, now you’re being a dumbfuck dipshit again…
Queen GIVES MC a wife to breed (without asking what reward he wants – and YOU fucked up asking for Rebecca; why the FUCK was that even an option asshole???)
Assumes that her “reward” at all was wanted; it was REFUSED several times by the way…
Then you have her SLAP him = for NO GOOD REASON but to be an ASSHOLE.
Don’t you fucking DARE to ask me if I think I “deserve” to be rewarded when YOU know the jackass did sweet fuck and all… That’s YOU being a PRETENTIOUS PRICK!
> The queen mentions a heroic saint; an ASSASSIN – Yet she was STUPID enough to SLAP and insult the person who has NO VESTED FUCKING INTEREST IN HELPING HER DAMNED CITY TO START WITH!!! Dude, did you EVER think about that? Who says he can’t just catch a ride with that 11 (whoopie – I found 11 FUCKING WHOLE COINS… GREAT IMPLEMENTATION OF THE SANDBOX BULLSHIT JUST FOR THAT >.< ) coins and go literally ANYWHERE else. Just for a start.
He was “recruited” (You mean CONSCRIPTED – ASSHAT: There’s a difference, Recruit is fucking VOLUNTARY!) as a “reward” [How the fuck in your twisted assed mind, does that at all constitute a reward?!? Whoo hoo, I get to go get my ass merc’d by the entire world at her whim, just to “serve” the queen – who’s GOING to treat me like SHIT. Until I prove “useful” and the same thing with her bullshit coded FemDom Daughter – WHO DOESN’T NEED TO EXIST BECAUSE THE FUCKING DAUGHTER SHOULD BE THE DAMNED QUEEN!!!]
She “gifts” him a maid – because Slavery is Legal Durhhh… – as a wife; WITHOUT ASKING IF HE WANTS HER, to breed. With NO HOME. NO PAY TO SUSTAIN IT. What. The FUCK. Is WRONG WITH YOU DUMBASS?!? O.o Jesus. And you want anyone to want to keep playing. If you can’t even tell how to PROPERLY REWARD THE FUCKING PLAYER: Why should we? (And now that you’ve mentioned Breeding -You ARE OBLIGATED TO FULFILL THAT PROMISE TO THE AUDIENCE! WITH ALL LOVE INTERESTS)

I’ve played to a certain point; and I’m going to lay out my grievances (plot problems/mechanics) more calmly. Mostly to prove to anyone who’d insult me for my “reviews” that I can. I choose not to.
= First, Alex becomes a problem when you let the player choose Single, Married or Divorced… and then put her into the fucking story after that point as in the same damned world. Regardless of whether we chose Single, or Divorced = I picked Married; and you STILL made her in the flash back bugger off… so SHE considered it divorce as far as I can see (and god knows who she was fucking at that point, or if it was for “work” behind MC’s back)
= You do absolutely need to find a way to make the MC BREAK THAT DAMNED BETROTHAL BEFORE ANYTHING SEXUAL HAPPENS – and this IS me saying it calmly. This was a plot arc that straight up DIDN’T need to happen. There is such a thing as a girl being far too much trouble to be worth pursuit. MC’s not actually going to “win” her this way {And you needed to make it more clear between taking or refusing her father’s coin which option the bitch LIKES… because her face is the same whether I fuck myself financially to “score good boy points” with her or not} ** You forgot the fucking SLAVE in the market that wants 2 Gold to be bought? The fucking brothel that wants 2000 to be bought? MC NEEDS the fucking money far too much to refuse ANY offering. Because you haven’t actually PAID the bastard in any way but pussy… and even that was grudgingly.
= The queen should NOT be Menopausal > if she can be fucked; she SHOULD GET PREGNANT. If the player chooses to cum inside of her – that’s ME telling you I WANT THAT CONTENT.
= Alex as a character IS NOT Harem material by this point. She’s NOT redeemable. She’s been a bitch; she’s already cursed, and she’s a Tsundere for no good reason. Then you decided to have the Queen marry her off to her son – in a vein that NEGATES the whole tag of HAREM.
= If you’re going to offer Coercion as means to negate consequence in a war: CARRY IT THROUGH. Have MC get to the point (as a double agent test run – for a start – since you want to go there anyway) and have THAT be how we bork the betrothal >>> WIN Alex into the harem. At this point if she IS MC’s ex girl than she’s NOT NEGOTIABLE.
= Also, in every one of your end slide bullshit scenes from this point – you say “for now” Maia, and ANY OTHER GIRL who is effectively married (or will BREED with the MC) does NOT get to be “for now.” That’s not Harem! It’s YOUR job to write in the means by which there IS NO PATH TO FUCK THE RELATIONSHIP UP. Or pick a different genre. Jesus.
= The queen SLAPS MC (while aware he could be a Hero/Saint > and MIGHT be an assassin… this is monumentally stupid. [No woman gets the right to hit a man, for any reason, if you’re going to pull the bullshit A Gentleman Doesn’t Hit A Lady crap * It’s NOT okay either way] and now both she and Avery NEED to apologize to MC. Especially since they’re both going to be FUCKING/BREEDING WITH HIM! [Also Dude – foot fetish in real life is at least uncommon as an actual fetish, for a reason > lay the fuck off with it * you’re gonna turn off more than you gain with that crap]
= There was LITERALLY no point to you offering a “kill the queen option” just for a beheading scene if I actually try to get “revenge” for the slap/Femdom bullshit that doesn’t need to be in the game (killing her is overboard anyway; DOMINATING HER – BREAKING HER TO MAKE HER GIVE US THE CROWN… that’s revenge. She has guards all over the place. Even if you let it go through without the retarded “game over” he’d still have to get out of the palace and the city = it’s NOT smart)
= You also shouldn’t assume anyone wants to play – or lose at – your fucking minigames. Give an option to SKIP with the assumption MC wins, and it’s fine. They can still be there for those that don’t mind playing them, but they don’t fuck over the rest of us. [This includes the D&D bullshit maze – which didn’t need the three Hentai monster loving bitches!]
= You married us to Rebecca after exactly 3 QUESTS > and state we can’t actually FUCK her until we marry her… We’re ALREADY. MARRIED! Her words, your words. At this point you may as well state in brackets “not yet implemented.” Same thing for Smith girl. You can fuck my ass but you can’t BREED me until we’re married??? And by the way, I’m NOT paying for seperate houses; it’s a HAREM GAME. She doesn’t get to force the issue of living with ALL of my damned wives. Which should include Alex, the queen, avery and literally ANYONE else that I decide to make advances on. That’s the point of clicking to make the advance on them!
= The fuck was the point of the witch anyway – you sent Kat to the dungeon so we’d have an excuse to see Ruby Tuesday again; but couldn’t be bothered to make her pipe up and say “Hey I’m sorry I was an ass but if you let me prove I can be a GOOD GIRL, I can perhaps be of help?” You bloody included her dumb ass in the D&D game because YOU want her femdom bullshit there so badly > it CAN work the exact opposite way, and she might even figure out she enjoys it better that way. Just… fuck me.
So far as I have played, the most frustrating part is barring the usual troupy fuck ups, and convoluted characters that shouldn’t be in the game = it has potential. A lot of potential. It would be nice if Maia wasn’t currently up to the third quest (which involved a random side quest with a lot of potential breeding that who knows if we’ll ever find out if it actually frigging happened…) wasn’t the ONLY confirmed pregnancy. Or the only one we CAN actually breed with in the main roster. It would be nice if you’d just straight up said by Ava; you DO have magic, but I can’t read it. If you can’t unlock it, it could be that you have it dammed because it’s just too much. Leaves it open for MC to BECOME a spellsword without the convoluted bullshit. He’s got to go talk to Ancient as balls elf to help him find the key to that lock… why? Exactly.
= What the fuck is the point of a “dark path” No really. Tell me.
> You don’t want the MC to be dark. Dark path just seems like you want to be more of a DICK to the MC, and you want an excuse for it.
There are exactly 3 questions in a harem game (and 3 BECAUSE of the retardedly pretentious “dark” path) that matter:
> Do you want to fuck/Implicitly KEEP This Girl?
> Do you want to BREED this girl?
> Do you want to BREAK, or otherwise OWN this girl as her Master???
The Break Option is basically the BDSM on the Dark Path, where Master/Owning is Love.
It’s that simple. There doesn’t need to be endless ways to fuck up. The gift option is stupid when he needs so much money to invest in two other girls getting into the harem. If you had other means to RELIABLY gain finances, fine. You don’t. So you can either fix that, quickly, or remove that mechanic. Entirely. It’s so far been just a lot of “I have nothing to give her”
I haven’t gotten all the way through the current update, but I meant what I said in the comments about Alex. If you push with her, at all into potential NTR content, I am done.