Haley’s Story

Ghaaaa, I’m so fed up of this “Daddy” role-play, I’m sick that Haley treats her beloved brother the same way she was trained to treat her rapist teacher and I’m pissed that the brother gets into it instead of getting her out of it!
He should make her experience how true love feels instead of going along with her traumatic role-play and treat her the same way she was abused!
The more the supposedly loving brother gets into treating her supposedly beloved sister like a “good girl”, the more he disgusts me, the least I believe that he genuinely loves her and the more I feel this whole story is hypocrite.

There are so many things which drive me away in this visual novel.

First, almost all choices are delusional because you don’t really have much choice in this “visual novel”.
I tried to actively make Haley hate me, I made every choice to lose points with her and even though I was at -28 with her, she STILL was all over me, which means that EVERY CHOICE about her are FAKE because they don’t change shit no matter what you choose, so you can basically consider that this “visual novel” is made of 90% delusional choices, which is really bad for a visual novel which is all about choices!
The only real choice that you have is who to include in your insane relationship with your bitch, because yes, you treat your supposedly “beloved sister” like your bitch.
I already said it, Haley experienced a trauma when she was raped by a teacher in high school and she is broken, she keeps calling her brother “Daddy”, certainly because her teacher trained her to call him this way.
“Take me Daddy, I’m your sextoy!” “I’m a bad girl, punish me, Daddy!”
Her brother, who supposedly loves her, should get her out of it.
He does the opposite actually, he enjoys going along with her trauma instead of helping her heal her broken mind.
And remember what he imagined the very first time that he fantasizes about her?
He pictured himself pining her down, blocking her throat with her arm, fear etched on her face, tearing off her panties and entering her in force while she screamed.
Yes, he basically fantasized about raping her, not making love to her, which speaks volume about the mind of the so-called loving brother, he actually is the same kind of wicked people as her teacher, he gets off with the same “forcing, dominating and submitting girls” that the rapist teacher did, he is no better.
Let’s face it, he is mad at the teacher, not because he hurt his sister, but because someone else did it, he has no problem with doing it himself, he is a wicked hypocrite.
Now I was saying that the only real choice that we have in this “visual novel” is who to include in the unhealthy relationship with Haley.
Well, guess what? Even this only real choice is denied from us!
Indeed, we have choices to start relationships with Diane and Alana, but they are scrapped along the way, there are only 4 endings: Haley alone, Haley and Sandra, Haley and Adriana or Haley and Lisa. What about Diane and Alana? What is the point of starting relationships with them if they are scrapped no matter what you choose?
Every ending is rushed and 2 girls have no ending at all.
This story starts many directions and scrap them all.
I’m not talking only about the 2 girls who are forgotten along the way, there are a lot more points in the story which just are forgotten to give us a “And they lived happily ever after” crap rushed ending.
It is obvious to me that the author didn’t want to continue what they started and just wanted to be done with it.
Also, we are forced to date Sandra, we have no choice in the matter, we can only choose to keep her or dump her, but we can’t choose to get with her to begin with, she is IMPOSED on us, and we have to break up with her if we want another girl, when we could just not date her from the beginning, what’s the point of imposing one of the girls instead of letting us choose who we want to begin with?
But the one with who we really are taken for fools is Haley.
For example, we have to choose to let her sleep with us or send her back to her room.
However, if we choose to send her back to her room, afterwards the protagonist tells her that he wants her in his bed, as if to tell us “Fuck you! I do what I want, your choices don’t matter!”.
Then why make us choose if our choices are cancelled afterwards because there is only one path to follow?
I really tried to reject Haley, but no matter how much I tried, the protagonist will always go after her, that’s really insulting us to ask us to make choices then ignore them and tell us “Screw you! You don’t have a choice!”.

Also, this is “Haley’s story”, and the main problem to solve with Haley is her trauma because she was raped by her teacher and her mind is broken.
And even though this is THE MOST IMPORTANT PART of her story, it is COMPLETELY SCRAPPED!
In the end, Haley is still broken and she didn’t confront her torturer.
We can deal with him if we choose to ask for Victor’s help to deal with him and get his “friends” to take care of him.
But then what? We get a call to know that “It is done.” then we forget all about it.
We never know what happened to him and Haley doesn’t know that we took care of him so what’s the point?
The point of punishing him is to show Haley that she got justice, that her torturer didn’t go unpunished, that her nightmare is gone, that she will never see him ever again and that he will never hurt anybody else, which will help her heal her wound.
So we should see on TV that a teacher has gone missing, Haley should see it, then her brother would explain that he did it, he got rid of him for good, he punished the man who broke her, she is safe now, she can heal, that’s the point of dealing with him.
But does the author care? Obviously not, because he just wanted to be done with this story.
He didn’t want to actually complete it, he just wanted to patch a rushed ending to tag it “complete” then forget all about it.
The protagonist keeps Haley in the dark. He doesn’t tell her that he took care of her rapist when she NEEDS to know it in order to heal!
Which tells us that he didn’t do it for her sake, he did it for himself, for his own ego, because he was mad that another man than him owned his sister, she is his bitch, not anyone’s else.

We have further proof of the selfishness of the brother when he gets mad at Haley when she jokes that she will find another man while he wants to be free to fuck anyone he wants.
He is unfair and he doesn’t care.

Also, we are hinted that the mother knows about the teacher, because it was her who stopped him.
We also are made understand that this is the reason why she is so cold to her daughter, because she didn’t understand she was raped, she thinks she was in a relationship with her teacher of her own will.
So obviously we want to talk to her!
We want to know what she knows and clarify the situation to her to fix her relationship with her daughter.
And we never do!
Once again because the author doesn’t care.
He gives hints then say “Fuck you! We don’t care!”.

The main issue is Haley’s trauma, and it is left unsolved, it is forgotten for a rushed ending.
Because almost all choices are illusions.
The story really doesn’t care about what you choose, it always comes back to the only path no matter what you do, so your input is nullified, you are made believe that you are free to choose your path but you are not.
Because 2 of the 6 girls are made unavailable.
Because Haley is imposed on you even if you are given choices to reject her, you are taken for a fool, her relationship score is an illusion, it makes no difference, it is pointless.
Because you are forced to date Sandra even if you are not interested in her.
You are forced to break up with her instead of having a choice to date her to begin with.
Because the protagonist is an hypocrite.
He pretends to be a good brother, to protect his sister, when all that he truly cares about is to OWN his sister, he enjoys treating her the same way that her rapist teacher treated her meaning that he is just as much disgusting.

Great CGS but super Linear at this point.