Forbidden Thoughts

Kinda agree with John. Funny thing that… And I’ll let you guys figure the joke out. Or is it in…

Hey, at least it’s not sexual- wait a minute…

Not to belabor the point but in a game tagged MALE Domination, the first two actual choices besides input your name Player are the “Mom” character already acting like a FemDom (for literally no really good reason – as the Dev ASSUMES that’s what we may be into; and is actively COUNTER to what is actually tagged… figure that out) and we get to choose to not “Submit.”

Then the very next choice is ask for money (he means BEG) or pay a compliment (which is entirely unearned, and literally given because she exists and has tits. Whoopie)

Then we go to class; we have the resident best friend who’s just there. A sexpot teacher who poses like Mrs. Robinson (NO Teacher would keep their job past two seconds for either posing that suggestively in this day and age, or dressing that way – it’s a lack of professionalism; and she should NOT want to get raped by a group of oversexed teens for fuck sakes) So yea. If you’re a brick = here’s your game.

If you happen to have one functioning brain cell, run away. Very. Very. Far away. Because I guarantee you, as much as the Dev thinks Literature is the “art of appreciating beauty” (No. It isn’t. I say this as a WRITER myself, dumbas. Literature is the appreciation and comprehension of written works. Beauty is subjective, and more about visual arts/poetry at best – which generally is it’s own genre and not taken as “literature” so to speak unless it’s collected in anthology format as a group of works) they obviously don’t have a clue how to write a decent story.

Dude, you’re writing character types, like you assume the “audience” is an overage male. The character you SHOULD be writing is a TEEN. The characters engaging with said MC should treat him like he is a YOUNG/Near adult. Not like a hungry cougar two steps away from a freaking fresh cut steak, as an authority figure. And Nikki… she straight up says she KNOWS “you’re too big for this cage.” How? Exactly what point of I met you five minutes ago says anything but; Hello, my name is: Clueless. She has nothing but the LOOK of him to draw on, to say as much. Which is freaking hilarious because WE haven’t freaking seen the MC yet at this point. Jesus.

If this is the best you’ve got Dev, I’d say you can hit me with your best shot – because you couldn’t hit me on your best day. Nevermind the broad side of a given barn. If English isn’t your first language, fine. Fair enough, maybe nuance is different in your country. I have no clue, but if English is your first language maybe you need to hire on someone that CAN write a comprehensible story, and characters that talk like they’re talking to each other. Rather than the player behind the screen.