Cross Realms

First – Ask if I want Pregnancy Content instead of Lesbian and you’d more have my attention. (Lesbian DOES NOT belong in a MALE-LEAD harem!!!)

= SECOND: Do not fish tail on how powerful the FUCKING MAIN CHARACTER IS!
= STOP trying to fuck him over (without actually REWARDING THE PLAYER for it!)
= You are COCK BLOCKING WAY TOO OFTEN.

= NO ONE. FOR ANY. GODDAMNED REASON. SHOULD EVER BE MORE POWERFUL THAN THE BLOODY MAIN CHARACTER IN A FUCKING HAREM GAME! This is NOT a hard concept.

= You are NOT doing nearly enough to level the main character up: This shit is based off some crappy assed mobile game (and it’s NOT a good parody of it because the PLAYER should actually get to BUILD FUCKING LEVELS + STATISTICS!!! Genius)

= There was NO call to say his Mom is X super special bullshit, and then GIMP ALL OF HIS FUCKING PROGRESS WITH THE SYSTEM YOU SET UP IN WORLD-BUILDING JUST TO MIND-FUCK YOUR AUDIENCE. YOU stated that he is 56 level whatever the fuck… LET. HIM. USE. IT! >.< You fucking prick. Don’t tell me what his mom was; and insinuate that MC is “special” at every second paragraph and then proceed to have it mean exactly fuck and all. Tell me who his Dad is, that makes him even more special than they originally thought – but also guarantees there’s a reason for his gated progress: because he’s just destined to be TOO POWERFUL. Then you have a credible case to gimp this bastard as badly as you’ve done, right out the gate.

= It does NOT matter what the god damned GIRLS CAN DO. He is the one that is MEANT TO PROTECT THEM. NOT the other way around. They’re NOT going to FUCK and/or BREED WITH someone that’s weak enough to get bitch slapped around every fucking time you randomly decide to teleport his ass half way across the goddamned globe for no bloody good reason = which you NEED to stop fucking doing. What the fuck is the point of saying X sanctum is the “safest place for him” if you’re NOT going to allow the player to TRAIN AND PREPARE, SO HE MIGHT… NOT GET HIS ASS ABSOLUTELY HANDED TO HIM? Come the fuck on. This genre is NOT that hard to code well. It’s basically a lay up if you don’t bork the established structure.

Your roster’s going to be too small at this rate. There was NO POINT to adding in Zula and then stating that she could COME BACK if he reached a certain STAGE in the rankings and then NOT LETTING THE PLAYER DECIDE TO FUCKING DO THAT. Jesus Christ that’s just needlessly retarded mate. There was no point to the mind scene with the dark elf. If I wanted to fuck someone in my mind, I’d stick to Reality you absolute retard. And DO NOT DARE to marry Serana off; you DO NOT pull that fucking card. Not if you actually want anyone to continue to support this damned game. The main character NEEDS to stop apologizing for fucking existence; you need to stop forcing him into situations where we can TELL that you’re forcing him to think he needs to apologize and NO. Dipshit; the girls DO NOT get to hit the MC. EVER. AT ALL. FOR ANY GOD DAMNED REASON > ESPECIALLY NOT SEEING THEM NAKED, WHEN THEY BLOODY WANT HIM TO SEE THEM NAKED TWO SECONDS LATER! And stop fucking calling him a pervert. Not a goddamned thing he’s done in the game has actually bloody been perverted. You have no idea how much that pisses me off. (Dyna DID NOT need to win every fight in their training montage either > In fact at her size, with the idea that they WERE NOT USING MAGIC; MC has the physical advantage! That IS A FACTOR. She WOULD lose at least SOME of the time, it also dents any sense of actual progress. This IS a SHOW. DO NOT TELL issue) ** You gave him a big FUCK OFF sword that literally weighs 10 TONS and cannot be lifted by anyone at the damned school… That right there should’ve been you’re “I WIN EVERYTHING, BY RAW BRUTE FORCE – AND YOU CAN’T STOP ME” plot armor point. For fuck sakes, it’s not that hard to get.

There is NO point in padding the run time this hard, when you’ve BARELY let this asshole get to the second of eleven ranks and you’ve outright stated that getting to the last is going to be all but goddamned impossible anyway, for how long it will take. Make his Daddy a bloody dragon, or a demon or I don’t know… a DEMIGOD or an actual God. Something that STARTS immortal; problem solved. You can take as long as you want in that case… if it doesn’t give the audience massive blue balls to wait that long for him to be where he should’ve been to START WITH. Which is potentially AT LEAST three to four ranks above the base rank. If you hadn’t intentionally cock blocked his progress and then offered NO OPTION TO ADVANCE IT! What pisses me off most is that the renders are decently attractive; there are no lollis (thank fucking god, and that’s not an invitation for fuck sake) and the bones of the structure you set up are actually solid.

For an RPG this COULD be Awesome. If you’d fuck right off and actually let the player make character progress based choices. You don’t even offer points with the girls at all times when it should bloody count. almost half the roster that has been unlocked has been stuck at 2 POINTS for almost the entire game so far. The highest has fucking 4 points… and I have been following the recommended walthrough choices WITH a cheat section that shows me the character progress. (I know that I CAN use it to gain more points, but I should not have to – and THIS IS WHY YOU DO NOT LOCK SCENES WITH ANY GIRL, TO A FUCKING POINT VALUE SYSTEM, IF YOU’RE ALSO NOT SMART ENOUGH TO ALLOW THE PLAYER TO ACCRUE SAID FUCKING POINTS!)

= You have all the girls with specializations and bullshit out the ass to make them unique… and captain derpy ridiculously big dick for an Asian is just sitting there useless as tits on a log. Because YOU as the Dev don’t actually want HIM to be “special.” There is NO point to the rank of “Qi God” if you are NOT going to LET. THE. PLAYER. WORK. TO ACTUALLY ATTAINING THAT MOTHERFUCKING RANK!!! So as far as I am concerned; if you want my support at all, THAT Rank had better happen for the PLAYER character – and ONLY the fucking player character! – before the damned game ends. Before the middle of the game would be best. That way you have time to actually offer choices in specialization. And he better have the absolute BEST specialization possible. Or all of them for all I care. For all the shit you’ve put me through in reading all this crap, and all the blue balling with bipolar bitches you pull, you OWE at least that much to your audience. It’s NON negotiable. And do not introduce the sky blue haired “prodigy” just to save the MC from a fight that didn’t need to happen until he could handle it himself for fuck sakes… and then say she’s NOT going to be in the harem roster. That would be you being an even bigger asshole than you’ve already managed, and it would be quite a feat. Not that I want to see it.