Cambion

Okay asshat; you want to make Sloan “The Goddess/The Siren” and treat the Cambion (who is your FUCKING MAIN CHARACTER!) Like her GODDAMNED GUARD DOG… THEN FIX THEIR FUCKING RELATIONSHIP! [The SIREN does NOT get to be MORE IMPORTANT/More Powerful than the MAIN CHARACTER – IT’S CALLED CAMBION GENIUS. NOT THE SIREN]

SHE. IS. THE ONE. THAT FUCKED UP. NOT MC. You MAKE HER CONFESS. To the fact she still WANTS HIM TO KEEP – FOREVER. NON NEGOTIABLE. Then MC won’t have a reason to decide not to protect her. You fucking idiot. Right now he literally thinks she’s getting bent over the couch NIGHTLY – and she’s not done a damned thing to MC EVERY SCENE SHE’S IN to make him think otherwise. You NEED to make the AUDIENCE SYMPATHIZE WITH HER. Which you can’t do when she’s been this level of retarded asshole to the guy she supposedly ACTUALLY WANTS TO BE HER PUSSY’S OWNER. I say supposedly more because YOU have been REALLY SHIT AT SHOWING THIS FACT.

If she’s THIS focused on MC for more than a year: SHE. BELONGS. TO HIM!!! – she shouldn’t have goddamned ever even TRIED to get with anyone else and she SHOULD be on her knees begging to get his dumbass back. Or hell, just make her fucking apologize and share the fact she LIES every time she says he pisses her off; she doesn’t remotely hate him and she’s been entirely a rancid CUNT to him because she gets jealous of how much female attention he gets. Come the fuck on man… You do NOT get to make her that important to the story. No. Just fucking no. She can die in a fire the way you have her written right now; fuck werewolf girl. No really > let me FUCK the BITCH out of the ice queen teacher, not to mention her retarded ass dominatrix bitch simp.

And I’m not even getting into Mei. Or now Tabitha. Married means NOT in the fucking Harem (ALREADY married would be okay – as long as she’s not actively still fucking said husband; because Mei is GOING to be fucking said husband the way you have set this bullshit up > Which BREAKS. THE. FUCKING. HAREM!) Tabitha being “with someone” BULLSHIT. First she’s chunky to start with, second she was a massive bitch at their first meeting for no reason (because she KNEW he wasn’t lying) and third, why the hell is it so hard for you to make ONE. FUCKING. GIRL. ACTUALLY ENDEARING?!? One girl. Who isn’t taken; an outright asshole by incomprehensible order of magnitudes to the MC, or set up to get really, REALLY pissed when it comes to the confession that MC WANTS A HAREM.

First fuck up – Sloan and MC used to date… USED TO; WITH NO PLAYER CHOICE ABOUT WHETHER THEY KISS BEFORE HER “FRIEND MENTIONS HER “NEW BOYFRIEND” THAT SHE DOESN’T FUCKING NEED TO HAVE.

= Hard sell for being a bitch TO MC right from the start (I do NOT care why)

= Hard sell for being The Ex (This is the why, I presume; wants him back and is shit at saying so – thinks SHE fucked up… and WON’T admit it)

= Dating someone else (even if barely and or recent) means COCK BLOCK!

= You. DO NOT. Have A HAREM when you pull this shit!!!

***** You better NEVER introduce this “William” asshole, or have him be somebody I can CUCK with Sloan (willingly) who will either BE A VIRGIN or having LOST SAID virginity to the MC already. You massive fucking dick. He’d also better never get ANY scenes at all with Sloan, romantically, or you may as well remove her goddamned character entirely from the game.

This was the problem I recall now, in the FIRST time I downloaded this bloody thing months to a year or more ago… and it’s STILL a narrative problem for the genre your tags profess the game to be. So either she’s “dating” the asshole but NOT actually dating him (using him as a convenient shield while ACTIVELY SHOOTING HERSELF IN THE FUCKING FOOT WITH MC… WHO SHE WILL WANT BACK IF YOU’RE NOT RETARDED) Or she genuinely breaks the whole concept of the Harem you’re claiming this bloody game to be. >.<

This is NOT a hard concept to grasp dev.